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"It"

It came pretty close but it never really occured,
I know your pops is religous and after marriage is preffered,
We've been to second base but never rounded third,
But im ready to knock it out the park just utter the word,
And my parents are gone so we're free as a bird,

Not lil ceasars but we are hot n' ready,
So much so... my palms are getting sweaty,
Nervous and trembling cant seem to hold steady,
But im ready to love you just as long as you let me,
Basically bound to each other never to be set free,

Just hold my hands and everything's going to be fine,
Two becomes one as we begin to intertwine,
To say we reached perfection would be a crime,
But I'm just greatful to say I was apart of your first time,
I'll be your original and you'll be mine.

IM NOT A PERV. I dedicate this rhyme to my friend spaztastic. Remember kids just say no, or protect yourself if you say yes.






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xClUSiVE I KIZ
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commentCommented on: Sun Nov 23, 2008 @ 06:18pm
lol. dude dat was awesome i like it


commentCommented on: Wed Nov 26, 2008 @ 12:51am
lol nicee
"use protection" hahaha



xpersonXD
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iiGetSoFreaky
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commentCommented on: Wed Nov 26, 2008 @ 03:32am
haha i like this poem
nice mssg at the bottom
=)


commentCommented on: Sun Nov 30, 2008 @ 11:48pm
lol that wuz gud



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Silliest_sweetheart
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commentCommented on: Sat Dec 06, 2008 @ 09:15pm
Nice poem
(specialy the message on the bottom)


commentCommented on: Thu Dec 11, 2008 @ 01:27am
i think u shud edit it 2 my nu avi's name now lol



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XOstrawberry-kealyOX
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commentCommented on: Thu Dec 11, 2008 @ 03:27am
your poetry is great
but i bet mines better
next time start with the first date
u should write letters

lol jk hi hi u sent mi a friend request n if u still want to be friends comment ghetto fabalous kiara


commentCommented on: Sat Jan 03, 2009 @ 04:21am
crying heart I loved it. It made my eyes water up, but then i polled it together and read the rest of it. U should post that on the web. The first time i did it i didnt use protection. I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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Creepeh
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commentCommented on: Mon Jan 05, 2009 @ 03:35am
Ah that was hot.


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