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My sheath well if i had to say.... from head to toe, i got my Detroit cap sideways on my head.... ya know, some shades that would grab your attention.... like they said hello, all ways a flashy collared shirt.... like the threads aglow, guess jeans with large pockets.... hopin my bread would grow, footed not with nikes.... but my chucks instead fasho, they think they already know like psychics, got me figured completly and they dont like it, officials say hes already got a layer of slight grit, just waitin for him to make a mistake when he might slip, females say hes just a fast talker with slight wit, but he aint a relationship holder he just might quit, strangers are confused the truth is cloudy just not clear, but they assume that im one of those that they should fear, this would bother most but i shed no tear, but i say they will all see the truth just not this year, im going to make it through the darkness i have to persevere, dont be decieved by the sheaf, the blade is sharper... than it appears.

Posted by: Dynamite_The_Cool Fri May 30, 2008 @ 02:01am

im not worried it's more fish n' the sea,
besides im on my mision to be....

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Commented on: Fri May 30, 2008 @ 02:56am


	wow thats good i like it alot razz

Commented on: Sun Jun 01, 2008 @ 05:31pm


	nice journal sounnds like a pretty poem

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Commented on: Sat Jun 21, 2008 @ 04:15pm


	I LOVE that alot its awesome!! heart

Commented on: Mon Jun 23, 2008 @ 05:47pm


	You do got some good poems the other was deep an touching u could become big one day remember me wen ur a super star lol xd

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Commented on: Wed Jun 25, 2008 @ 09:11pm


	Ooooo I like dis poem 2 it waz nice

Commented on: Thu Jun 26, 2008 @ 06:15pm


	cool poem.

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Commented on: Thu Jun 26, 2008 @ 07:43pm


	haha this one is cool i really liked the last paragragh

Commented on: Sun Jun 29, 2008 @ 07:50am


	i like it

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Commented on: Fri Jul 11, 2008 @ 10:26pm


	to much rimin damn just playin good job

Commented on: Mon Aug 11, 2008 @ 02:35am


	nice poem smile

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Commented on: Tue Dec 22, 2009 @ 09:46pm


	at first glance i thot it was going to be too much rhyming but it was very rhythmatic and flowed it was nice and it seems like you were true to yourself in this poem you seem like a super great guy and very intellectual. . .continue writing your good at it

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