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Fatal Love Look you know i love you baby, And i know i drive you crazy, I know i've been unfaithful lately, Everlasting, forever and a day you'll always be my lady, I want to stay together so please.. come back and SAVE ME, I love you with all my being, every thing i possess, I love you beyond all means, beyond what words can express, And i worship the ground you walk on I must confess, My love is overpowering and it cannot be supressed, Because without you close to me im in distress, Since we seperated ive been tossing and turning in my bed, Rivers could be made of all the countless tears i shed, I couldnt bare life without you, i rather cease to live instead, so.. im glad these are going to be the last words i said, I engraved your name in this bullet so you would be the last thing going through my head, BANG..... P.S. I am not emo this is just a poem i thought would be deep

Posted by: Dynamite_The_Cool Mon Jun 23, 2008 @ 05:33pm

im not worried it's more fish n' the sea,
besides im on my mision to be....

THE COOLEST

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Commented on: Mon Jun 23, 2008 @ 09:55pm


	OMG I heart THIS POEM ITS SOOO SWEET U SHOULD WRITE SUME MORE OF THESE exclaim 4laugh exclaim exclaim

Commented on: Tue Jun 24, 2008 @ 02:26am


	awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was a good poem an yes ...........it was deep!!!!!!!!!iloved it it was good..amazin..awesome!!!all those things, yea that was good mrgreen crying deep sweatdrop whee 3nodding mrgreen i love you mrgreen

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Commented on: Tue Jun 24, 2008 @ 04:36pm


	nice its cool

Commented on: Tue Jun 24, 2008 @ 07:30pm


	im not gonna ask why your writing this but keep em coming

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Commented on: Tue Jun 24, 2008 @ 10:31pm


	woooww thats real deep i really like this one heart

Commented on: Wed Jun 25, 2008 @ 01:30am


	wow...u are like da most....i dont know whut to say! its so deep and itz amazing coming from a guy's point of view....wat i relly mean is I LOVE IT!!!!!!!ITZ BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!! blaugh

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Commented on: Wed Jun 25, 2008 @ 08:47pm


	awww dis poem waz so beautiful smile

Commented on: Thu Jun 26, 2008 @ 06:14pm


	that is deep.

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Commented on: Thu Jun 26, 2008 @ 07:12pm


	Awwwww i really like this is so nice so yeah but its amazin i LOVE it heart

Commented on: Thu Jun 26, 2008 @ 07:44pm


	very deep.. all ur poems r really good u should keep them coming

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Commented on: Fri Jul 11, 2008 @ 10:23pm


	that was so emo just playin keep it up and im of u pround

Commented on: Fri Aug 29, 2008 @ 12:24am


	Love it! 3nodding

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Commented on: Wed Oct 29, 2008 @ 01:54am


	awwwww its so sweet and lovely just like u rite how sweet thizz 1 is the best i like!!! heart 4laugh 4laugh

Commented on: Sat Dec 06, 2008 @ 09:28pm


	cry This almost made me crying I was thinking of my ex the whole time this was so deep crying

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Commented on: Sun Jan 11, 2009 @ 12:01am


	DAMN boy thats so deep and touching this one is one of my favorite! 4laugh razz mrgreen

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