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Game IN v2
Chapter 1: encounter in the world of a game.
There was once a young girl only at an age of 17. She walked on alone with a gift she had received from a show she had just won. She was only allowed this game for the weekends. So she went around to find a play station to play it in. she wondered how with just a single text she was able to win a new game with a memory card.

It was set up for her and she played it. She wrote her name for the female heroine( She discovered that the game had a female heroin so she wrote her name), Liana. Suddenly a bright light came out of the television. She covered her eyes blinded by the light.

(She opened her eyes and saw darkness, trees and old broken houses). She woke up in a dark deserted forest village. She didn’t know what happened to her and where she was. She looked around and everything was unfamiliar. There was no one around she was all alone. Suddenly she heard odd sounds as if there was something moving. Then it came a dark green slimy creature appeared, their eyes were bright yellow as if her soul was sucked in fear. There were about 3 of them and combine as if punished to a swampland. She felt it at first glance that they were dangerous creatures so she quickly hid inside a broken wooden house. The monsters passed by and she remained very quiet. Suddenly one of the monsters stopped.
In a creepy voice one said, “I smell it human flesh.”

She then knew she was found. She was in grave fear that tears slowly formed in her eyes. She then slowly crawled away slowly carefully not making a sound. But as she was outside the house the monsters found her.
“There you are human” the monster said.

She was trapped in a corner as she leaned at the wall while facing to her death against 3 unknown monsters. She closed her eyes in fear with tears bursting forth. Then she heard slashes and screams of monsters. As she opened her eyes she saw a blue haired young standing in front of her as he killed the monsters. He had bright blue serious eyes that sparkled in the night moons shine that felt very mysterious and deep. All monsters had fallen and he places his sword back in his sheath. He then faces her as she shivered at the floor. He smiled very gently at her as he gave his handed for her to lift herself up. She received the hand and stood up. She then wipes her tears.

“Come with me. Your destiny is waiting for you.” He said in a very serious yet gentle voice.

She followed him then when fear has stepped aside she asked him, “excuse me but where am I?”

“Ounun a country divided between democracy and dictatorship. Both lands are stained with corruption. You are currently in metis village. Let us go this place is dangerous for you.” He answered.

Then as they walked on suddenly the Youngman stopped and draws his sword.
“We are surrounded” he said.

Several monsters then came out all vicious and hungry.

“Stand back Liena. I’ll take care of them.” the young man said.

She was bewildered to how he knew her name. The monsters then charged. The young man fought then all but they were too many for him. Arrows flew towards them. The young man quickly covered liena with his body taking the arrow shots. She could felt the arrows hitting him. He tolerated the pain but suddenly a monster came and struck him with a sword. It came through him. Blood spilled on her clothes and it was flowing out very fast. He coughed blood as he leaned on her body.

“I will protect her.” she heard him whisper. Then he was surrounded by a red light. He then stood up with his injured body and killed the monster behind him. More we were coming. He then faced his right hand in front of him. A symbol of a wolf appeared at his hand and said, “Wolf fangs.”

He then scratched the wind and fangs appeared in the wind and destroyed the monsters. Nothing was left and they continued walking. Liena helped the young man as he still continued to walk despite him injuries supporting his heavy weight. It was a very serious wound and she could see that he was suffering. She wondered to herself why she was feeling that way. She was no longer afraid as much as she was and that she was able to calm down so fast.

She then thought as she remembered the magic that the young man used, It was no ordinary magic it was a magic only known in one world, the world of heart ruin. Heart ruin a long running RPG in the game world that she has played before. She wondered if it was a dream, but she was wide awake. They reached a cave and inside were a big rock with foreign writings.

“Go to the rock” the young man said. He laid himself at the wall where he sat and rested.

She looked at the big rock and felt a deep connection to it. She then felt what to do as if it was second nature. She lifted her right hand up and both the rock and her hand started to glow. She felt tremendous warmth in her heart as she felt something enter her body. The rocks writings then disappeared and on her hand was a carved heart... ‘It was like in the game’ she thought.

A light then appeared in front of the young man. The light revealed a woman in flowing clothes facing Liena.

“Holder of the power of the heart here begins your journey.”

“Excuse me but what is happening?”

“You are transported into this land to save the people with the power that only you can wield you must seek the mysteries and save the land from the corruption and oppression. Your journey begins now”

As the woman said so she was enveloped in a bright light. Before she had gone away she looked at the injured young man. The young man looked back at her and said, “Believe Liena, if you believe with all your heart everything is possible.” She then slow feels herself disappearing from the place as she watches the man that saved her cling to what’s left in his life. She wished that he would survive but it seemed impossible for anyone.

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  • User Comments: [19]
    fallentearsdrops
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    Thu Nov 30, 2006 @ 07:55am


    hi im not on to happy about a girl getting suck in to her tv but its good


    [PNC] Link
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    Thu Nov 30, 2006 @ 07:56am


    wow monsters cool blaugh


    J 2 the D
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    Thu Nov 30, 2006 @ 08:03am


    THIS IS AWSOME

    gonna subscribe


    Leggo My Preggo
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    Thu Nov 30, 2006 @ 08:04am


    Excellent storyline. I enjoyed reading this very much. ^.^


    sawblade76
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    Thu Nov 30, 2006 @ 08:05am


    Ooh, cool. Hehe... scary monster. domokun


    El Perverto
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    Thu Nov 30, 2006 @ 11:35am


    You need a lot of work on writing stories. You flow and word usage makes it dull, and seem as if written at a middle school level.


    Why does he love me
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    Thu Nov 30, 2006 @ 11:36am


    Sorry its too long and cant be bothered with it..... short attention span


    [ insert username ]
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    Thu Nov 30, 2006 @ 11:37am


    User Image
    kewl whee <3


    double sharkbows
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    Thu Nov 30, 2006 @ 11:38am


    Nice, but a little cluttered. Double space between paragraphs please?


    Frosted Baker
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    Thu Nov 30, 2006 @ 11:38am


    I like that story


    H.E.R.S.H.E.Y.S
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    Fri Dec 01, 2006 @ 10:47am


    Adorable! <333333

    I luv it whee whee

    I gotta learn to make one of those whee


    PocckyFlavoredRamen
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    Thu Dec 28, 2006 @ 04:54pm


    Cool story ^^


    C h a r B e a r
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    Fri Dec 29, 2006 @ 10:13am


    Wow this is really good...you are a very skilled writer ^_^


    LOL BATMAN
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    Sat Dec 30, 2006 @ 12:02am


    ;]

    that's pretty cool.
    <333


    Master Endrance
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    Sun Dec 31, 2006 @ 05:20pm


    Rather interesting... I'm quite anxious to see where you can take us with this story. Will Liena ever return home to her world or will she decide to stay protecting this one.

    ninja Though the grammar could use a bit of a touch up I enjoyed it. ninja


    wufwhelp03
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    Sun Dec 31, 2006 @ 05:30pm


    I really liked this one write more, I'm interestsed.


    EmilyJaneRose
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    Wed Jan 03, 2007 @ 04:36am


    That Was An AWESOME Story thingy i enjoyd reading it


    wenfy
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    Thu Jan 04, 2007 @ 01:30am


    This is awesome! Just like an RPG game


    atitude_hot_chick
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    Thu Jan 04, 2007 @ 01:43am


    thats just great i so good prize plz


    User Comments: [19]
     
     
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