2 more songs of mine, they both suck but I figured I might as well put them up here. The first one was written in dedication to 3 bands, I tried combining their lyrical writing styles into one along with my own, and it turned out weird. The second one I finished today and is currently untitled. If you can think of a name for it after reading it, let me know.
Skinless Cannibalistic Fetus Corpse
Malnourished society, fed with hate and gore. Calling these twisted ruins home. Walk down the cracked path, getting that feeling of being watched. Town of terror, this homemade nightmare. Look at what has become humanity, barbarity and slaughter are everywhere. No penitence for the damned, just regret, hate, and pain to contemplate. Feel the mortal terror spring inside you. Scratches on the metal, waiting for a cue. They'll show you hell, death is nothing compared to what they'll do to you. You'll beg for the end. Pray to your God in vain. All hope was abandoned, you'll see soon. None can help you, just one of thousands to die here. Be proud of the human race, we've become the dictators of life, subdued and mutilated everyting in our path. Become the fuel for our degrading way of life. Your life ended when you entered our domain. Embrace the malicious calling as they swarm to you. Tear the flesh, savor the blood, the swarms mesh, warm liquids mix with the mud. Organs flung like ribbon, decorating the barren land. Ecstacy is found in your murder. The corpse is left as a warning, make the others feel the foreboding. More will come, more will die. Treading from the outside, our severed ties.
Untitled
Desolation of the soul, a black void in its place. Heart ripped out as swiftly as it was revived. Nothing left to lose, nothing else to gain. Pain has gone past the boundaries of being numb. That sense of falling, watching as your salvation is torn and defiled. Nirvana is a myth, Hell is your Heaven. You put your trust into it only to be greeted with rejection. Was it worth it? Pull once more on those strings, dance like the puppet you are. To weak to leave, crave those lies given to you. Weak minded and empty hearted, deceived by the silver tongue. The more you give the more pain you'll receive. Was it worth it? Crawl once again to your false messiah, broken and pummeled. Ask for penence, pray for forgiveness, it's all a joke to them. You were warned, but it fell on deaf ears. You were shown the Truth, but the way was shown to the blind. This is what you have earned, this torment you conjured. To weak to break away, feeding off the corrupted words they speak. Tainted are they, a fool are you. Stick with what you have chosen, betrayed are right intentions. Seep deep in Hell fragile soul. Salvation has died, your heart still tied.
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