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It's a book thing.
My title says it all.
New Story
The green car was slowly crawling up the street. She was looking down from her high perch on a tree. Her wild black hair curling around her face and neck. Her pale grey eyes were following the car as it drove up the highway. She constantly jumped from tree to tree to make sure she never was left behind. Everytime she leapt from one tree to another she was threatened of being exposed, but with her amble movements and her quick thinking, the chances that she would be were slim to nothing. The sun was behind a cloud at the moment, which is why she could allow herself so high up, so near the bright, warm rays of the sunlight. As soon as the cloud subsided, she would be forced down onto the ground where she would have to run with the car, still hiding in the pine trees. She knew that the drive for them, and the run for her, would not be so much longer. The house that they were moving into was just up the highway onto a new road. It was the one house she was most familiar with, for she was living in the basement as the day came around. As she jumped into a new tree, a bird flew straight into her face. A crow. She opened her jaws and snapped down quickly, feeling the feathers upon her tongue like tiny hairs covering her taste buds. She spit the feathers aside and smacked the bird down, watching it fall onto the piles of pine needles below her. A cold air rushed up and locked around her exposed legs and arms. She was wearing a slim black skirt and a ripped open black top. Her eyes were dark with liner. Her thin lips were curved downward. She was ripping through yet more branches as the sun appeared from between a break in the clouds. She closed her eyes and flinched. Then she jumped off of the branch she was standing upon, dropping down, down, to the ground. Her body hit the ground with a soft thud, and she was back to running again. The car had it's turn signal on, so the road was coming up. She leapt across the highway onto the side where the highway would meet the new street. Just as the car turned, she clung to the side of the house she had been residing in for more than a week. She quickly climbed up another tree and threw herself onto the roof of the white old mansion. She slowly stalked to the edge of the roof and looked over the edge as the car pulled into the driveway. A low hiss escaped her lips and she threw her hair back out of her face. There were two females in the car. They both had their blonde hair pulled back into tight buns. They seemed joyful that they were moving into the home. As she focused a little more, she saw a dark haired boy in the back seat, he however didn't look so happy. She brushed her tongue over her teeth and sank back against the chimney. The sun once again broke from the clouds and she was rushed into pain. Her skin felt as though it was ripping from her body, her muscles, her soul. Every part of her screamed in agony. She ran quickly and pushed herself off the back of the roof and landed silently next to a bush shaped like a dolphin. She looked back and forth swiftly then bolted into the woods behind the house. She pushed herself as hard as she could. Branches whipped at her face and left small cuts of which healed almost immediatly. Her shirt acquired a new rip down the back, almost completely tearing her shirt off. But still she pushed on. Finally she exploded through the darkness of the trees into the light of a meadow. There were a few deer scattered about the meadow, an even lesser few of them had young fawns either at their sides, or nursing. She smiled softly and threw herself at one of the deer. Her teeth ripping through the throat. Warm blood seeped between her lips as she drank slowly. The lovely heat sank down her throat, her senses becoming sharper and sharper with every ounce sucked down. Her breathing slowed and she leapt up, off of the deer, and landed in the tall grass, her legs bending as she crouched lowly, blood dripping from her chin to her neck. The remaining deer looked up and sprinted to the safety of the trees. The fawn of the deer she had just consumed was nudging at it's mothers snout. Foolish, she thought as she wrapped her fingers around it's neck, and squeezed. A sweet crunch radiated from the bones of the deer, sending a shiver up her spine. She stood up completely, and let her eyes scan over the shadowy meadow. She couldn't be angry with the world forever, she knew. Pure hate surged through her body, rage against those intruders. She decided at that very moment not to let them out easily, if at all. A smile spread across her face as she turned back to the woods she came out of. She leaped up and gripped a branch tightly, then swung her legs over and climbed higher and higher until she came to the top. She jumped from tree to tree until she arrived back at the house. She would wait until dark, then give them Hell on Earth. She would show no mercy.




Again, comment on it please.






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VintageMystery
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commentCommented on: Wed Jul 23, 2008 @ 05:59pm
o.o Wow... that was amazing. ^^ You are a great writer.
Once you are finished with the book you should get it published. xP
If you did, I'd be one of the first to buy it. :F lol.


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