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a konoichi/jinchuriki's journal
stories and poems about neka, her friends, her love, and other things in between (and one or two things from her creator)
poem called "my fear"
waz up ya'll summers finally here yay i love summer except for the heat its so hot here in LA okay now im off topic okay for the people who read my joural and know alot about my naruto charater neka you know shes deathly terrifed of rain and whos to blame orochimaru {lets just blame him for everything....oh wait i do razz } so one rainy day here in LA {and i mean really rainy} i thought about how terrifed neka would be shed be hugging her sasuke plushie and waching it fall and then waching her sister play in the rain so i wrote this poem {there was a pic with it but i have no clue how to use my scanner heehee sweatdrop } any way im shutting up and letting you read.......oh yeah its in neka POV

my fear

it rains i watch it fall form the safety of my bed watching it fall still fills me with dread
my little sister plays in the drops
she jumps in a puddle and lands with a PLOP
she lauphs she loves the rain
but when i see rain i feel that old pain
deep in my mind where bad memories are laid to rest
one memeory wont leave like an unwanted guest
its the time when i was forced to join a snake
i did join him because i knew if i didnt it would be a big mistake
my time there was was so unbearable
haveing to go on missions in the pouring rain was so terriable
the weight on my heart was so heavy
but the weight on my body was almost to much to carry
with both physical and emotional pain
i thought i would be killed by the strain
some how i escaped i never thought it would be
but sasuke came just to rescue me
now when it rains i run and hide
but no matter what i try
i still see that evil glimmer in his eye
those eyes slither into my dreams
evry night i wake up with a scream
now i watch my sister form the safety of my bed
i pray she never has to suffer the path i had to tread
i will always carry the emotional pain
untill the day i die i will always hate the rain


so like it soon i may put another poem thats in sasuke POV i have way to much fre time ....oh well






User Comments: [12]
Carmen(Car)
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Mon Jun 18, 2007 @ 03:43am


I can neva get enough of dat poem!


Zero Justice315
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Wed Jun 20, 2007 @ 01:56am


Can't relate... see, my birth element is water. So I don't hate rain.


RebeI
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Tue Jul 10, 2007 @ 05:04pm


bump


Spaz_n_ReRe
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Sat Jul 14, 2007 @ 10:44pm


i like th peom it is kool and u do really good with writeing poems lol ^^


xLunar Assasin13x
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Sat Jul 28, 2007 @ 06:59am


I hate the rain too,I dont know why though.I have an element too,its fire.I bet thats why I hate rain.


Herry Rockabore
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Tue Aug 14, 2007 @ 11:25pm


That poem is so deep and it represents Neka so much. I'm glad though that in the RPG that she and Rose killed Orochimaru, now hopefully she'll be less scared.


Sweet Sounding Silence
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Sun Sep 02, 2007 @ 01:40am


I love poems!!


heart ,


Alyss


Yaruki-chikopi
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Tue Oct 23, 2007 @ 11:23pm


i never knew the real story how neka hated the rain, ....... i thought that she was afraid only because cats hate the rain cry


Chloe_of_Cloud
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Mon Jan 28, 2008 @ 04:31am


I dunno Rainy days make me feel kinda depressed but I do kinda like going out and getting all wet blaugh Heehee.... Great poem BTW!~


Carmen(Car)
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Sat Feb 09, 2008 @ 03:24am


I just wanted gold so i commented on a random entry without reading it.


Roxi13
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Sat Mar 15, 2008 @ 10:03pm


Awww...I like rain. Thats a really sad poem, almost brought tears to my eyes. crying


User Comments: [12]
 
 
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