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a konoichi/jinchuriki's journal
stories and poems about neka, her friends, her love, and other things in between (and one or two things from her creator)
hold me close
hi peoples im bored so im posting a new journal its a poem and as you can tell from the subject its called "hold me close" okay so the story behind the poem is i was drawing in math class (bad me razz ) and i dre this pic of sasuke and neka (for you people who dont know me neka is my naruto ninja that sasuke loves (ha in your face sakura!!!!!)) anyway so i drew this pic and they were kissing and the way i drew the hands it looked like sasuke and neka were holding each other close and this poem just came to me i hope you like it btw it can read as either sasuke or neka


Hold me close

Hold me close let me know what you know

All your pain and all your sorrow

Let me know your pain I’ll share it with you and we’ll feel the same

Hold me close let me know your thoughts I see to be loved is what you’ve always sought

You know that pain I know it too now I know there’s a strong connection between me and you

You can also see that you and I are meant to be

Hold me close though any kind of weather we’ll protect each other now and forever

Hold me close because we both know it’s true

We hold each other closely to say “I love you”


i love that poem im going to submit it to my schools literirary magazine next year






User Comments: [10]
Sweet Sounding Silence
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Fri May 25, 2007 @ 11:44pm


Cute 3nodding blaugh heart

heart ,
DrAkE


rock_for_life_101
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Sat May 26, 2007 @ 12:28am


cool i like it


Carmen(Car)
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Sat May 26, 2007 @ 04:15am


Luv it!
Luv it!
Luv it!


Zero Justice315
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Sat May 26, 2007 @ 02:56pm


No comment. Don't talk to me anymore.


garra_15
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Tue May 29, 2007 @ 04:37am


i like you pome it is so cool


Nohake
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Sun Jul 01, 2007 @ 03:32am


hehe^^ this saya it all -------> ^3^ XD X3

...Dei owns

BANG!!!


XxHalothreexX
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Tue Jul 10, 2007 @ 01:20am


DEE DA DEE


Herry Rockabore
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Tue Aug 14, 2007 @ 11:37pm


Great poem I wish I was as good at making poems like you. I'm better at witty puns rofl Haha


Yaruki-chikopi
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Thu Nov 08, 2007 @ 06:11pm


wow, thats a great peom! good job! blaugh btw, i love your way with words! heart


Chloe_of_Cloud
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Mon Jan 28, 2008 @ 04:28am


Oooh I like poetry! That was a really nice one!


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