Just another story, tell me what you think about it.
"Come on, Zeke. I wanna show you something. It's right down the river." Onyx says to Zeke.
"I don't know Onyx, I'm kind of scared." Zeke replies.
"Come on, it's just a river. Don't be such a little baby. So are you coming or not?" Onyx asks.
"Well...let's do it." Zeke answered.
Onyx jumps it the river and starts swimming with Zeke close by following him.
As they are in the river swimming with the current it starts raining.
The rain keeps getting heavier and heavier as the minutes go by.
Finally Onyx finds a small island.
Onyx started swimming for the land.
"Come on, Zeke! Hurry!" Onyx shouts.
Zeke started swimming towards his friend.
"Grab my hand!" Onyx offers.
Zeke does, and is now safe on land.
"So are we gonna wait out the storm here then head to that place?" Zeke asks.
"Yeah, while we're here, let's look around."
The boys start walking.
They come to a turn, at that moment Onyx notices something.
"Zeke, stop walking. We have to leave. Now." Onyx whispers to Zeke.
"Oh yeah, now you're just trying to scare me." Zeke said loudly.
Zeke starts running,
"Zeke stop!" Onyx grabs him.
"Hey! Let me go!" Zeke said as he pushed Onyx away.
Zeke started running again, with Onyx chasing after him.
Then they both realized that they had went in a group of people's property.
What they saw shocked them.
There was a boy with cuts on his face, who was trying to break into a case of some sort.
A girl that was eating a dead raccoon, raw.
Another boy who was pushing a shopping cart filled with smelly meat.
And an adult.
They couldn't tell if it was a boy or girl,
but whoever it was,
they were pail and had messed up teeth.
Also they were a very old person,
wearing a black cloak,
and holding a staff.
They both knew they should run home as fast as they could.
So they started running back.
The creepy old person started pointing at them as they ran away.
They got in the river,
they think they are safer now,
but still know they are in some danger.
"This storm is pretty bad." He said as water splashed in his face.
They swam on.
Then Onyx turned around and saw Zeke getting dragged away by something in the water.
They tried to grab each other's hands.
"No, not now, not like this!" Onyx thought to himself.
But it was too late.
Zeke had already gotten dragged away and was out of sight.
Onyx started swimming home.
The rest of the story is unknown.
The last thing that happened was their parents reporting missing children.
The boys were never seen again.
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