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IIIII LOVE CHEDDAR CHEESE!!!O-o...............um dont ask
saint and salior
This is where I say I've had enough
and no one should ever feel the way that I feel now.
A walking open wound,
a trophy display of bruises
and I don't believe that I'm getting any better, any better.


Waiting here with hopes the phone will ring
and I'm thinking awful things
and I'm pretty sure that few would notice.
And this apartment
is starving for an argument.
Anything at all to break the silence.

Wandering this house
like I've never wanted out
and this is about as social as I get now.
And I'm throwing away the letters that I am writing you
'cause they would never do,
I would never do, never.


So don't be a liar,
don't say that "everything's working"
when everything's broken.
And you smile like a saint
but you curse like a sailor
and your eyes say the joke's on me.

But I'm not laughing and you're not leaving
and who do I think I am kidding
When I'm the only one locked in this cell?


So don't be a liar,
don't say that "everything's working"
when everything's broken.
And you smile like a saint
but you curse like a sailor
and your eyes say the joke's on me.






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crzylyzrd
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commentCommented on: Sun Apr 22, 2007 @ 04:19am
woah...
seems REALLY depressing
did sumtin happen tht i dunno about neutral


commentCommented on: Sun Apr 22, 2007 @ 04:32am
it's about jackson and kevin



jmgsrw
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Byakuya Kuchiki-Capt-
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commentCommented on: Mon Apr 23, 2007 @ 08:01pm
"And you smile like a saint
but you curse like a sailor"

my second fav part. i like the alliteration smile, saint and sailor, and its also ironic. <yah im sorda an english freak XD> blaugh

"Waiting here with hopes the phone will ring
and I'm thinking awful things
and I'm pretty sure that few would notice.
And this apartment
is starving for an argument.
Anything at all to break the silence."

Faveate part, i think everyone in their life would feel like this at least once in their life.

"This is where I say I've had enough
and no one should ever feel the way that I feel now.
A walking open wound,
a trophy display of bruises
and I don't believe that I'm getting any better, any better. "

its nice that u think no on should feel like that, but its bound to happen to everyone in life. I swore something to myself...er this isent the place to be saying it though, its sorda privite, if u would like to know PM me.

over all i think its really good, the mood though is sad, and very reflective, gives me this like depressed feeling, i think ur a strong wrighter.


commentCommented on: Thu Apr 26, 2007 @ 03:09am
i agree with him blaugh



crzylyzrd
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