Change of my Style
YO! My name is Remotto Hiyakanie. I am a young boy who is 15. I have hair that is fluffy and a mini spiky mess on top my head. It is the color of a copper coin mixed with dark delicious chocolate. My eyes are a deep, blazing red tone that resembles blood. I live in the busy city of Tokyo, Japan with my lover Jinn. He is a fiery red head I fell in love with. Today is his birthday and my story takes place with me heading to his house.
Chapter #1:
A young boy runs down to his house. His face shows trims of excitement and happiness. He looked like a hyperactive puppy bouncing though the crowded streets. He pushes aside many now angers people in his hurry, but seems not to have a single care. He only hopes to reach his lover on this very special day.
Finally he comes to it, his own home and haven of which his beloved love is awaiting him. (heeeheeee! Jinn is going to be shocked when he sees the present I got him! Or he could be anger that I didn't get the milk. Oh well he likes the stuff to much anyway!)
~note- while reading please remembers if the words are in quotes then the person is thinking.
"Damn it!!! Where are my keys!!!!!!?” Remotto finds his precise keys and hurries to open the door. Then he drops them in the process. "Damn it!!!!" The boy gets them back. Finally the door was unlocked and swung open. "Holy s**t!!!!" Remotto looks at his home. However it is not the same. It is shattered and broken. It seemed as dead as ice.
"What the ******** happened," Remotto cries out in disbelife,"Oh man!!! Jinn!! Jinn! Jinn!!!" he calls his companion as he stumbles though what is left of his apartment. Things were torn, ripped, and looked as if played with like old worn out rag dolls. Anything that had any meaning two the two boys that lived here was destroyed. The once well organized living environment appeared as if it were the place where a tornado had hit. Along the floor lay garbage, no longer readable books, and crushed video-games. The worst part was the walls. They usta be covered a nice light tone of faded blue. However, now they were darker. They had been recoated with another color. The color that blended with Remotto's eyes. He stared in his lavishing horror that seemed to never end. The fiery tone of fresh blood was spread throughout his surroundings.
Blood! Blood! Blood! Remotto's thoughts fell though his own ability to think straight! He only though of questions that ran like rain into more questions. His mind was tortured by what could have occurred. (What is this? Why? When? I was only gone a little while!!!!!!! Where is Jinn?! Is he ok?!!! Is he alright?!!!!!)
"JINN!!!!!" he yells as he runs to Jinn's room and then falling onto his lover's bed. The mist of the air was cold. Yet at the same time a bit warm. It had an unstable feel. Remotto hadn't felt like this in a while. All he could really think was "Why?" Then the confused and tormented boy felt an unfamiliar hand slide up his back leg as he lay vulnerable on the silk-sheeted bed.
“What the ********?!!!! Who is there?! Hello?!!!!” Remotto yelled. He swung his body around to face a person. It was a man. He had rainy blue hair that came down to his chin. It was slightly messy on the top, but thinned out as you looked it all the way to the bottom.
The man was silent. Then in a quick second he held out his hand. It contained an object. It was……A FLOWER!!!!!!! (WTF!!! WHAT THE A HELL?! HE HAS A FLOWER!!!!!) Then before Remotto could even think about another thing beside the man having a flower in his hand and his yet seen lover the man grabs Remotto’s hand.
“YYYYAAAA!!!!!!” Remotto screamed. His whole body got sent jolts of excruciating pain. Remotto was confused and in a great deal of pain. Then the room fell silent. Whatever happened was over and the young boy was on the ground.
Remotto was left in the hands of this “savior”.
 Kittie379 · Mon Apr 09, 2007 @ 04:14am · 4 Comments |
