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In my Head...
Me...
Erase me...
Out of all of these people
At all of these times
Why now?
Affecting, Rejecting
The one thing I really want

Trying to express
Refusing to regress
I silently protest myself

I show no common signs
But still I must realize
Maybe it's not about me anymore

Been out of my hands
For quite sometime
Why won't I just let go?

From imperfection
This is my final request

Erase me...


Comment: Just a poem writing in the moment just now I'm not sure I like it but at least it's real.






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makon
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commentCommented on: Sun Mar 20, 2005 @ 12:57am
interesting poem. not bad. i give it a one thumbs up. and that's being nice. j/k


commentCommented on: Sun Mar 20, 2005 @ 03:13pm
I like it....I WUV it...but I know what you are talking about, too. Very well said and beautiful....



Luridan
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~pixielover07~
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commentCommented on: Mon Mar 21, 2005 @ 03:43am
i like it ..no i agree with ari i luv it... although i am not too crazy about the message it conveys b/c you r my sister and i luv u very much... but other than that .. its great


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