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Poems (4th entry) "Swift like my sword"
Another poem.... is that ok? so what if i like poems.... i think it is good i guess...


[ Swift like my sword
Here we are
Daylight's star
Made out of dreams
Perfection of your own
You are alone
O so incredible
Each dream
That sparks a light
That will guid our way
through this dark night
Will we wake to see the next day?
Broken wings
Made of tears
The mirror light shinging
On my sword
Reflect this tears to the unknow
To rid me of my own.







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Holidayrocks
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commentCommented on: Mon Mar 19, 2007 @ 02:55am
Many typos yet love the poem I give 9/10


commentCommented on: Tue Mar 20, 2007 @ 02:18am
First,second,third times the charm Jor you have to put this in you poetry book for school razz razz xp xp surprised surprised



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