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My Insane Ramblings.
i quit my other...i'm going back to bad poetry...
i want to write poetry!
My Storm
This storm that I live
The storm that is my life
I feel it weakining,
as if I was dying,
but how could I be dying?
I have found you,
but even as I found you I knew,
I was fading,
you reached me to late
you lost me now,
will I ever see you again?
will I ever see your light?
The winds of life are forcing me down,
drowning me in the sea
the see that never was, never will be,
and never should be,
it is the sea of the end,
where we lost each other
are you here?
I know your out here somewhere
are you lost?
did I leave you stranded in the End?
no! I won't lose you!
not again,
I will find you again
I swear it.
for you I will end this storm that I live.
if it gives you a clear road home
tell me now!
I need you now!
I need your light!
I will Find you!
I won;t leave you!
but i don't here you answer
was i to late?
I feel weak
my strenth has left me
still and cold
like a copse
as I watch my self in a mirror I realise
you saved me after all
I wish I could have saved you to.
BY: Sakuka

(I know it's kinda...blah...but still...I was half asleep!)






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Winry_Rockbell799
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commentCommented on: Fri Apr 20, 2007 @ 01:08am
I really like it! I like how you used the sea as a metaphor and also the way you ended it with the mirror and everything! ^^ I don't think it sounds "blah" at all!


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