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An old man sat
on a corner alone.
His face was pallid,
but his bright eyes shone.

His hair was gray,
as was his mustache.
On his lap, a suitcase
held a little cash,

a set of clothes,
a comb, a razor,
toothbrush and toothpaste,
and a red woolen blazer.

He rose and stood
as the train pulled up,
and tossed in the trash
his coffee cup.

On his wrinkled face
a smile made itself known
for he knew he was going,
finally,
Home.






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Demonic_Pyro_halfbreed
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commentCommented on: Fri Aug 18, 2006 @ 02:29am
I love the way you wrote this...it reminds me of my granddad a lot....


commentCommented on: Tue Sep 05, 2006 @ 01:38am
You know: I read this entry a looooong time ago... Like, 19 seconds....rofl...and I should have commented on it before. I luv it. I think it's my favorite entry of yours so far. Everything is so... sad. crying It's touching.



GET IN DA CHOPPAH
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spartan299
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commentCommented on: Thu Jun 07, 2007 @ 10:33pm
wow...that was beautiful...i feel in a good mood now.


commentCommented on: Tue Nov 20, 2007 @ 07:10am
that is very good



theblakestrose
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