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I am Eclipse-the-night, but you can call me Eclipse.Thats what I prefure. Anyway, I have had a lot of problums latly.I dont talk about it much.My life has been realy sad and geting worse.Atleast I have friends to depend on.If it was not for my girl friend I would hate life.She helps me more than she knows and I love her, but I am more about others.I help them any way I can.So If you need some one to talk to that you can trust you can PM me.I will be glad to help.My experences can help a lot of people. That is why I wont to help.Just remeber I am here if you need me.
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I wrote these poams for all Kinds Of people. I hope to see them published. So give me feedback. I will love to hear from you. There are two parts of tese poams. One is dark One is light. So enjoy.

Death by Love
By Eclipse

Death so sweet, come to one so young. Come to take him from his pain alone. For his true love lost for gone. Never to be back and found another. Leaving that young man so hurt and alone. All his friends gone with her whom left that poor young one. So death please lift him and let him go home. To be safe and hurt no more.

Death is a peace for one and all. It is there for many things. One of which is to get rid of painful things,
so death is not to be feared. To me a blessing, a refuge forever from my pain.

Death come to me at last. End the suffering from this and that. You are here for me, to take me from my pain. Oh sweet sweet death please release my pain.

Death take my pain. Take my life. I want it no more. The reason to live say I, no purpose, no love. So, death take my pain by taking me away. Take me from the retched place called life. I wish to part from it and leave forever more.

Death it is you alone that can save me from this pain. It is you who can take me from the pain. Oh retched love it is you who I despise so much. It is you who cause my pain, you who will cause my death. Do you hate me that much to cause pain to whom that does not deserve? Oh why does this happen to one so young. Oh why does this pain hurt so much? So I am ready to go. Take me from evil love. Who hates me for reasons that are unknown.

Death go to the one so young. Took his life for he was in love. Poor soul does not know what is to come. Took his life because of pain, now will suffer forever more. Poor boy has so much more in store, here in hell, he won't last. Oh that poor boy, should we cut him a chance? The rules are against it this is true. Let us do it, no one will ever know. Let him go to heaven, where his death won't be in vain. He deserved that fate anyway.

Dreaded love caused my death at last. Oh why did I love her? She who hurt me so bad. Why did I still love her and leave? Oh why did I follow love, it leads such a painful path. Oh why did I take my life, for a girl, who was not worth it? OK death take me away. I did want to die anyway.

Oh deadly love. Terrible love. You said that you love me. Your lies and deceit cause only death and destruction. Oh why did I love thee with my whole heart? You claimed you loved me, then caused my death. My death caused so much destruction to my friends and family. Why did I trust thee? Oh why did I not move on? I'm sorry to have lost my life.

Is thou not death. If thou take many lives. Thou is worse than death. For death does it quick. You cause suffering to take our lives. If not anything, thou is worse than death. Thou is evil, a menace to the soul.
Thou is meant for good, for joy but yet you cause pain not meant for one so young. Thou is love but I call thee deception.

Why did I choose to die for something as silly as love? I knew what pain it could bring. Why was I so foolish to let my heart go to someone as cruel as that? She tortured my heart and through it all about. She handed it to me on a silver platter but it was all mucked out. Now I have no regrets because I am dead where I can not feel anything.

Loves Not That Bad
By Eclipse

Love is but a rose, Starts as a bud and than it grows. It is neither here nor there. Love is every where.

True love is hard to find. I am glad that I found mine..

Love can hurt, love can deceive, but love can do many wonderful things. It can be happy or sad, but it opens a trust that shows you can make it through any problem.

Love can change, it has many forms, like your friends, family, the difference is none. They all love you just the same. What dose love mean anyway? I don't know, its to hard to explain.

Love is good, no its great. Love helps me in just about every way. To get through school, or Evan to move, but it can be painful if you let it get to you.

Oh, love, why are you so asunder. You leave me here upon this beach, waiting return. Oh, why do you leave, oh, why do you make me wait? All I can do is wait for your return. I will always wait for you to come home.

Love comes and goes and this is true, but oh, why must it come and go. Why cant it just stay or leave? Why make me witch it come and go. It is so painful to see it leave. Why dose it come back just to leave. Where dose love go any way?

Oh love, the one no one could ever hate. Why are you such a blessing, to almost all? It is you who loved me, you who cared. You can cause pain, but one would hope not. What they do not realize, is what hurt them in the end.

Open your eyes, to see what love can bring. It is friends and family. Oh, so many things. It runs the lives of you and I. There is no deny. Love is for every one not just for I. Spread the love that we all share, to make a better place.

True love comes to one and all, who listens to its wonderful call. It can happen here or there. It can happen any where. Love is what helps you get through t the day, it can help you in many ways. The love of your friends or the love of your wife, love of parents, they are all real nice. They help you every day, they help you in every day.

Brute force is not the way, you should chose a different course so you wont lose your way and become a stray. Thats what I'll say. So give your all to make a new place, this one is a mess an every way. Change your ways, don't be that stray. Become changed, so you wont lose the way.

Love is never tame. It is a wild animal, looking for its next pray. To make so one fall in love is its Quest. To let everyone find another. Waiting in your hart for you to plunder.

Never demean love, it has so much to do with life. Love is one of the most beautiful things. All you need is to let your dreams take you away. It is the night in the sky. It's the sun on a bright red day. It is everything. The spring flowers, or the big green tree. It is what ever you wont it to be.






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hatoru9
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commentCommented on: Fri May 22, 2009 @ 02:08am
OMG 0_0 that was awesome biggrin you are a born erm poem...writer anyway that was so good please right more cause i absoluty adore poems like that yay! keep up the goood work! biggrin xd p.s:dont ever kill yourself because ill drag you back and kick yer a**! blaugh scream biggrin xd 3nodding heart ninja


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commentCommented on: Sat May 23, 2009 @ 05:12pm
crying that was soo touching!!great job!!!! crying



utena11221
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Minegishi Mii-chan
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commentCommented on: Sat May 30, 2009 @ 01:36am
Great poems!!!
You're very talented at poetry!!!
I could try for hours and come up with a really short and lame poem that doesn't even make sense!
Once again,
Great Work!!!!
You should create a book! biggrin


commentCommented on: Sat May 30, 2009 @ 02:00am
wow they're really sad but also extremely good ^.^ keep it up! someday you might become a famous poet writer ^.^



love_thats_forgotten
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DeadAccount2182
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commentCommented on: Mon Jun 08, 2009 @ 11:05pm
Those are some good poems.


commentCommented on: Sat Jun 13, 2009 @ 08:56pm
heart heart biggrin alsome love it



Holy d-dog
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liyah666
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commentCommented on: Sun Jun 14, 2009 @ 05:17am
hey i lov wat u wrote i liked it heart blaugh cool


commentCommented on: Sun Jun 14, 2009 @ 05:34am
AAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! that felt sooo beutiful the best 1 evr it beats all the ones ie read i bet u ,my life u will hav them published



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Raftelfan
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commentCommented on: Sun Jun 14, 2009 @ 06:46am
Good! Please write more 3nodding


commentCommented on: Sun Jun 14, 2009 @ 08:02am
your work is really good and very well writen.



Bozu-kun
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Bozu-kun
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commentCommented on: Sun Jun 14, 2009 @ 08:11am
also try this following website out it's a good place to learn about writing, a friend gave it to me and I found it to be a usefull website.

http://www.poetry.com/lulupoetryletter.asp


commentCommented on: Sun Jun 14, 2009 @ 09:11am
I enjoy reading ur poem although I really don't understand about poem..... sweatdrop
But I like it.....



Meili_Mochi
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sakura miyakawa
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commentCommented on: Mon Jun 15, 2009 @ 06:02am
WOW!!!!! THAT WAT SOO NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! can i get ur autograph? lol. I can't wait to hear another one XD biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin


commentCommented on: Sun Jun 21, 2009 @ 08:14am
hey they r awsome i cant wait to read more i like the dark poems the most but they were all really awsome



ichliebedich-yumeo
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princess-shahida
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commentCommented on: Sat Jun 27, 2009 @ 01:33am
wow

they r amazing

omg so wonderful i wud buy it but i wud want an autographed copy 4 free


commentCommented on: Sat Jun 27, 2009 @ 07:47pm
wow I loved the first one, you describe it perfectly, I say you publish them ^-^
the second one is ok too, but isnt the title supposed to be Love is not bad, instead of Loves not bad o.0 i dunno, it just came into my mind, anyway good job biggrin


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Eclipse-the-light
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commentCommented on: Sun Jun 28, 2009 @ 10:54pm
Yo dude. These are really good. Defenatly write more. You will be a famouse poet some day.


commentCommented on: Thu Aug 06, 2009 @ 02:09am
You are so gonna be a famouse poam writer!!!!!!!!!!Good luck!!!!!!!!!!



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tifferz_1997
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commentCommented on: Sun Dec 13, 2009 @ 09:21pm
I LUV UR POEMZ!!!!! crying the r so touching.! but plz dont die.!those poemz were AWESOME!!!!


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