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A sunset without a sun is no sunset at all.
A life without love is no life at all.
A rainbow without colors is no rainbow at all.
And heart without feelings is no human at all.
-Rachel Fogle-
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That night on the could breeze plains, you held my hand
Your skin so warm, smooth, broke the gloom inside my heart
The stars shined upon, the moon gave us her light
I could see your smile form on that precious peach flavored lips
I felt the wind blowing the grass like whistles under our feet

Your eyes looked at the lights, the mountains far away lit by the city
The heat of your aura warmt my hands, it took the sorrow away
The breeze waved your hair as autumn leaves, the moon smiled
The moon was jealous indeed, houw could such a beautiful girl exist?
Even tough the moon understood, Selene gave us her lovely light

Your head on my shoulder you rested, it made me smile in a long time
You slowly whispered my name, it broke my chains, it eased my mind
I could feel your essence, your lovely cheerfulness broke darkness
I said nothing, I slowly caressed your head, but of one think I'm sure
We understood, we're allways gonna be there, we're never be alone.


This poem was written by Tetsu and it's lovely. You're so good with imagery, Tetsu. Wow, your writing are better than most American teenagers! I'm glad you're here. heart






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Aldath
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Tue Feb 03, 2009 @ 08:14pm


redface Thankies cutie pie!
You're twice a best writer than I am 4laugh


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