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My poems


xXxVampyGenxXx
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Fight
Slip inside your mind
Tear the walls apart
Discover and find
I'm still alive.

Imprison me inside
Make this shackles hard
My scars and pride
Are my last card.


Hold my arms behind
I'll fight and break you down.
There's nothing to remind
What was your crown.


Your power is signaling
My life is fighting this.
Wolves are adventuring
My heart in sweet bliss.

Break open this doors
Let their lives unfold.
Reach out to my shores
There's nothing but cold.


Hold my arms behind
I'll fight and break you down.
There's nothing to remind
What was your crown.


I've bled so much I'm barely awake.
I've killed so much i barely have a soul.
Let me clean this snake
And I'll be a whole.






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Bluelizh
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comment Commented on: Tue Dec 23, 2008 @ 06:49pm
i thought the red part was the chorus of a song sweatdrop

but is good, pretty good


comment Commented on: Tue Dec 23, 2008 @ 07:21pm
thanks hehehe it was an attempt at a song... sweatdrop



xXxVampyGenxXx
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LoneSeraphim01
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comment Commented on: Fri Dec 26, 2008 @ 04:52pm
Pretty good. Keep it up Gen! *thumbs up*


comment Commented on: Fri Dec 26, 2008 @ 05:39pm
surprised
wow
o.o
u amaze me fwiend!!
its awesomeeeee
very vampirish :3
but its awesome
>> very misteriousssss rofl ninja



Cristal_watera_dragon
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Sasami526
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comment Commented on: Fri Dec 26, 2008 @ 11:43pm
Amazing!
I actually felt a sense of power and strength while reading this.


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