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Lee-full_Davis
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Part two: The Dark Hero....
After finding out what he could do, our hero, Lee, decides to tell Nick and Aaron what he could do...having survived the fight with Sam and his friends.

The Story...contiunes...

the three Psychics and been mediating when a fourth one appeared, she look distressed..

'Come Sister, whats the matter?' said one of the Psychics

'A-dark person, has been seen over the Arctic Sea, he was wearing a dark hood'

The Psychic fainted, the other three looked concerned....

'Contact the high Priest, he would be interested in this odd tale..' said the second Psychic..

Meanwhile, In Nicks house...

Nicks House isn't what we call 'Normal'; in fact, he once tried to cover the house with Polos, but they were gone within a week because someone kept eating them.

Another time he tried to drink 5 cans of the Limited Edition Red Bull with Cola, the result was he was running around with a crowbar and whack tree branches before the cops came (But because he didn't remember the actions, he was set free without a charge).

Anyway, Lee was telling Nick and Aaron what he could do, for some reason, both of them believed Lee.

'What i don't understand is why its happened to you, unless....

Aaron looked at Nick, who seem to be catching on to his idea.

Nick said, 'Lee, you are the chosen one!!!!'

Lee, Aaron and Nick were partying all night, untill it was 2:00am..
The others was asleep, but Lee couldn't get to sleep..
At first, it must be the affects of the Red Bull, but he kept hearing cries for help..

All of a sudden, he was walking outside, he looked up the dark, moonlight sky and was flying...and he was loving every minute of it, and headed towards Aston, searching for the pleas of help.
In the streets of Aston, there had been rumors that people have been gathering there, doing evil stuff from torturing people to god knows what..

Lee entered the dark streets and saw people screaming for help, even a little girl was crying for her mother. Lee was about to open the lock when a gangster wearing black and whites clothes appeared.

'Hey, this is DMJ turf, what da hell are you doing here?' the guy asked

'You will set them free...or pay the price' said Lee, but he sounded different..

'Oh yeah? Oi lads, we got ourselves a hero who thinks he can beat us!'

People were crawling out of the woodwork, all of them carrying guns, one of them shouted 'FIRE!!!' and, in about five seconds, Lee's body was blasted by 15 guns, each capable of firing 10 bullets per minute.

Lee's body crashed into several steel barrels, the people were shouting, 'What an idiot, he didn't last 5 seconds-WHAT!!!!'

Shortly after Lee was appeared to be gunned down, he was standing straight, the blue jeans and white shirt was torn, but the Black hoodie was untouched. he was like a completely different person.

'Shoot'em' he said again, but Lee was too fast and in about 40 seconds, all the DMJ group was beaten, the bodies were stacked up like a mountain.

Lee grabbed his mobile phone and called the Police.

'Yeah Hi, i noticed that the police force was having troubles with the DMJ gang, theres a surprise near their hideout, you can't miss it, the bodies our piled on the floor. Also, they are some missing people in cages, they looked hungry, see ya later'

He hung up the phone, and his finger was pointing towards the lock, he concertrated and a small line of energy was melting the steel locks.

He told them 'You are no longer Slaves to these people, you are free, i only ask is that you do not tell anyone about me, do you understand?'

they all nodded in shock, Lee was walking and flew back home...

9 hours later. Lee was asleep, wearing the clothes he worn last night.

'Oi, Lee wake up' shouted Nick, Lee was still sleeping, so Nick asked Aaron for a bucket of water. he chucked the ice cold water at Lee, and sure enough, Lee jumped out of bed.

'There you are, have ya seen the news? you not gonna believe this.' said Aaron.

they all went downstairs, where the sports news had finished and the real news appeared..

'Hi, this is Jon from Walsall, i've been sent to Aston, near the DMJ's hideout, the worst gang there and i'm seeing them on the floor, most of them being carried off to jail, but each saying the same thing 'This guy, he wore a black hoodie!!!'

Nick turned the TV off, and both of them were looking at Lee, who was smiling.

'You took down one of the worst gangs in Aston by yourself?'

Lee replied, 'I wasn't on my own, i recall getting shot several times, but afterwards i was a different person, it was like a more, darker side of me erupted, but i was in control. But if i'm gonna be a hero, i need a nickname or somma.'

'How about, Lee-Full?' said Aaron, who seem to be shocked about this.

'I liked that' said Lee. Nick brought three bottles of Orange juice, and said
To Lee-Full, Birminghams Favorite Hero'!!!!

Meanwhile, in Sams house....

Thank you for staying with us until we beat Lee.' said Sam.

It is okay, i have seen Lee before and i know how he works.
But you need to make sure his friends do not know about this, they could destroy our plans, we'll begin tomorrow...

They were talking about how to trap Lee, and this might be his biggest challenge yet..

But with Lee's Mysterious powers, can they beat him?

END OF PART 2!!!!





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AZ-the-hedgehog
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comment Commented on: Mon Jul 21, 2008 @ 07:28pm
xd You keep saying stuff like... "Along comes lee, the best guy that ever lived" hahaha, "His hoodies the best thing ever made" and so on...

To be honest, its too much of you bigging yourself up and not enough story... Kinda gets boring... Sorry to be so harsh... There wasn't much in this part, the first ones better...

I might be making a journal comic... If you wanna be in it tell me... wink Just something to do over the weekends and stuff... I'll make you a cool character...


comment Commented on: Tue Jul 22, 2008 @ 02:15am
I like it whee . Az did have a point, but its lees story. 3nodding He should decide for his own mind.



Noriko Kikuchi
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Lee-full_Davis
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comment Commented on: Tue Jul 22, 2008 @ 12:56pm
Whoa, that was unexpected....
i'm gonna be writing the third one soon..


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