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Depressing Poetry
Please comment I would really appreciate it. I want to be a poet someday.
Don't know how to feel because this feeling of pain,
Controls me.
Don't know what to say because this feeling of emptiness,
Consumes me.
Don't know what to do because this feeling of loneliness,
Overtakes me.
Don't know anything anymore because this feeling of nothing,
Breaks me.





Confussledlover
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    xFlaming Sorrowx
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    commentCommented on: Tue Jul 22, 2008 @ 04:55am
    cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry cry


    question ninja
    burning_eyes


    commentCommented on: Tue Jul 22, 2008 @ 04:59am
    Very Sad but still good, keep it up and you'll be a poet in no time! biggrin biggrin heart heart ...ok it might take a couple years...but you know what i mean lol, just keep it up ad you will be one biggrin biggrin heart



    Methendar
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