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poem
hey guys.IDK y, but 2day I want to do sumtin a little different. here's a poem I wrote on valentines day.I will Explain at the end,but here it is.

Heartbreak Ache
I love him so
I love him today.
Where ever I go
His heart will stay.

But he doesn't love me
For this is true.
He doesn't love me
But he loves you.

It breaks my heart
To see you together.
To see you kiss.
It's for ever and ever.

You know he does.
You know it well.
You do it to bug me.
I can tell.

He sees it too.
Hes see it in my eyes.
He knows what you do
The hurt,the lies.

You used to be my friend
Now we are foes.
What happened to this friendship
Nobody knows.

Now it's over.
What can I say?
You thought it was real?!
No,just valentines day.

Well,most of it is tru.I had a friend who used to be real supportive of me and my boyfriend.But then,she tricked him and me.She got him to break up with me.And it broke my heart.Well,we went on a feild trip to St.Louis five days later.She fake cried and made everyone think I made her cry.Only the ppl who saw it happen beleive me.Well,after we got back home,she asked out my ex.and to this day they are still going out.(this all happened last year.)But,the only thing that is not tru is the ending.The last stanza says I was just writing a Valentines day poem.Not tru.I was expressing myself in a safe way.if anyone reads this, I would appreciate it if u either left me a comment or sent me a pm.
Thank You






User Comments: [3]
Mewkitty the Great
Community Member





Thu Jun 26, 2008 @ 03:16am


Aww. This makes me want to send evil rabid chihuahuas to attack and gnaw on whoever did that to you!! >:3 >w< I like it. :3 Not what happened to you (o.o), just the poem!! I think you should write more!! ^w^ I suck at writing poems. .__. Do you mind if I send the link to one of my friends? Her name is Akumu Usagi. She likes poetry and this sounds like something she'd like. :3


iReggie
Community Member





Mon Jun 30, 2008 @ 05:05pm


dang,when I get to rosemark I'm gonna kick her @$$


BleachRoxMyEmoSox
Community Member





Sun Jul 06, 2008 @ 05:57pm


crying pure gold,lovely crying


User Comments: [3]
 
 
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