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ok i really need to know if this poem could get me sent to the guidance counselor.... again. please tell me and tell me whacha think!
(Thanks Lacey Mosley for helping me find my way!)

God? Suicide? A non-exisiting bliss?
Can one band help with all this?
When thoughts take over your mind
Thoughts that are not kind
Will you take out the knife
And end your life
Cause the thoughts of Satan will not cease
They will never decrease
Will you break down and cry
And just wish you would die
Cause you'd think no one would care
And that life is just not fair
Would you lay on the floor
When you can't take it anymore
Or would you try something new
Do what I do
Listen to a good band
One that'll give you a hand
One that'll touch your heart
And tell you what you're thinking isn't smart
One that'll bring you closer to God
And when they ask you if you believe you can only nod
Because you know you want to give everything to your Holy Dad
And you no longer want to be mad
So you get down and pray
That God will forgive you today
And you leave your old ways behind
Suicide does not even exist in your mind
And you look toward the heaven way
And shout out, "Lord I have become closer to you today"