This is a story I wrote in english class and I got another perfect on it out of the six point scale! Boo ya!! razz
Escaping My Loss
Kenneth Hedin
“So then, what does love feel like?” I mumbled over with a curious glance, tilting my head on its side like a dog as my hair flowed down the side of my head. She just laughed at me nervously and looked around, her emerald eyes scanning around as if looking for some hope of an answer, or searching her soul around her. She paused with a wide smirk and then looked at me and smiled. Her eyes glazed over with that look I had seen in her before when she looked away red, blushing from nothing. A long strand of hair slowly slid off her shoulder, sliding across her face until it covered her left eye. It didn’t matter; her right eye alone seemed to pierce my soul, dragging it out for her to see bare. That look had always made me curious and nervous at the same time. I could feel the blood rush to my face as thoughts of her blushing made my skin burn. In a sense, she had read my mind almost, as she moved in to me. She took a close step towards me, her perfume wafting sweet scents of lilac and coconut, sending a cold, tingling shiver down my spine. I could almost taste her perfume on my tongue leaving a fruity taste in my mouth. She must have felt it to because she closed her eyes slowly, opening her mouth in awe. She chuckled softly, a sweet smooth tone as she opened her eyes and smiled at me.
“Now… you are going to start to burn up... Your skin will get hotter. Your breaths will get faster. Every sense of you awakening.” She whispered over to me, the words sliding off her tongue. She was almost laying out how I felt entirely, as if she felt it before. I could feel my heart ache lightly as she told me, leaning in closer; a few inches form me now. I could feel her burning breaths scorching my skin, burning me through to my soul. My heart couldn’t stop beating, aching with a strange feeling. Each beat of my heart seemed to quake through my body and awaken all of my senses to their fullest. My skin was burning. Everything she said came true. I could hear her breaths pounding against me; my heart echoing a pounding through me like a drum. I blushed crimson from the feel of all my senses betraying me to her. I felt something inside my stomach start boil over. Something bubbling deep inside my gut making me bit my lip. I tried to answer her back.
“Yo-You.. are mak-make- making me… I- I feel-“ I stammered out nervously. I could make out that I was making no sense, but my body didn’t seem to listen to my mind. I almost felt like it was missing, lost inside me. She stepped in closer to me, Her hands sliding onto my hands now as they interlaced themselves in my fingers. Her chest was pressed hard against mine as I felt her quake and shiver on the touch as I copied her. I just closed my eyes and opened my mouth as I tilted my head into the air in bliss. I struggled to let back a strange moan. How, how could she have been controlling me so easily and making me feel this burning.
“Now… You feel like you have lots everything. You feel a deep burning inside called passion.” The words seemed to trickle through the air and echo through my head.
“P-passion…?” I stammered back, my eyes still closed to the air, as I bit my lip again.
“Yes, Passion. You, will probably feel like your brain is gone. You feel like it felt into your gut and started to make your stomach boil and burn. Your mind feels like it is burning making you nervous and stammer for words. You try to talk, but nothing really comes. You feel so much pressure, from inside you that it tries to escape you in a moan.” She whispered over to me as she leaned in closer to me. Her body pressed closer into me as I could feel her form mold against mine. Her lips were by my ear now, scorching me to moan lightly.
“Nnnghh-nngg…” I struggled to hold back the strange passion moan. I don’t know what she did next entirely, but I remember feeling her tongue lick my ear. I moaned out louder this time, trying to stifle my moan as I bit my lip harder. I could hear her chuckle as she leaned out in front of me smiling softly.
“Next… I am going to make you feel bliss. You are going to want more passion, until it overcomes you. Your skin will tingle with each touch and your heart will race. I am going to show you soft love…” She mumbled over to me as he hands trickled up my arms. The bubbling passion in my stomach overwhelmed me. I could tell she felt the same as I opened my eyes to see her breathing heavily in front of me blushing. Her hands slowly slid all the way up my arms until they both wrapped around my neck, pulling her closer to me. I lost all sense of nervousness... as all the sounds around me seemed to disappear as I focused on her. She was beautiful, sweet, caring. She was always around to help me. I seemed to just lose all thought as I gave into her embrace and put my hands on her hips slowly as if instinctively.
I watched as she leaned in slowly, closing her eyes, as her breaths slowed down like mine did. Our lips met softly as I slowly closed my eyes after hers. I could taste her lip-gloss, her casual Cherry red flavor. We stood there, kissing deeply, letting our passions burn us. Our souls met as the passion that burned us melted us to bliss. She tasted so sweet, and I wanted more in this long night.
scream scream scream scream
Escaping My Loss
Kenneth Hedin
“So then, what does love feel like?” I mumbled over with a curious glance, tilting my head on its side like a dog as my hair flowed down the side of my head. She just laughed at me nervously and looked around, her emerald eyes scanning around as if looking for some hope of an answer, or searching her soul around her. She paused with a wide smirk and then looked at me and smiled. Her eyes glazed over with that look I had seen in her before when she looked away red, blushing from nothing. A long strand of hair slowly slid off her shoulder, sliding across her face until it covered her left eye. It didn’t matter; her right eye alone seemed to pierce my soul, dragging it out for her to see bare. That look had always made me curious and nervous at the same time. I could feel the blood rush to my face as thoughts of her blushing made my skin burn. In a sense, she had read my mind almost, as she moved in to me. She took a close step towards me, her perfume wafting sweet scents of lilac and coconut, sending a cold, tingling shiver down my spine. I could almost taste her perfume on my tongue leaving a fruity taste in my mouth. She must have felt it to because she closed her eyes slowly, opening her mouth in awe. She chuckled softly, a sweet smooth tone as she opened her eyes and smiled at me.
“Now… you are going to start to burn up... Your skin will get hotter. Your breaths will get faster. Every sense of you awakening.” She whispered over to me, the words sliding off her tongue. She was almost laying out how I felt entirely, as if she felt it before. I could feel my heart ache lightly as she told me, leaning in closer; a few inches form me now. I could feel her burning breaths scorching my skin, burning me through to my soul. My heart couldn’t stop beating, aching with a strange feeling. Each beat of my heart seemed to quake through my body and awaken all of my senses to their fullest. My skin was burning. Everything she said came true. I could hear her breaths pounding against me; my heart echoing a pounding through me like a drum. I blushed crimson from the feel of all my senses betraying me to her. I felt something inside my stomach start boil over. Something bubbling deep inside my gut making me bit my lip. I tried to answer her back.
“Yo-You.. are mak-make- making me… I- I feel-“ I stammered out nervously. I could make out that I was making no sense, but my body didn’t seem to listen to my mind. I almost felt like it was missing, lost inside me. She stepped in closer to me, Her hands sliding onto my hands now as they interlaced themselves in my fingers. Her chest was pressed hard against mine as I felt her quake and shiver on the touch as I copied her. I just closed my eyes and opened my mouth as I tilted my head into the air in bliss. I struggled to let back a strange moan. How, how could she have been controlling me so easily and making me feel this burning.
“Now… You feel like you have lots everything. You feel a deep burning inside called passion.” The words seemed to trickle through the air and echo through my head.
“P-passion…?” I stammered back, my eyes still closed to the air, as I bit my lip again.
“Yes, Passion. You, will probably feel like your brain is gone. You feel like it felt into your gut and started to make your stomach boil and burn. Your mind feels like it is burning making you nervous and stammer for words. You try to talk, but nothing really comes. You feel so much pressure, from inside you that it tries to escape you in a moan.” She whispered over to me as she leaned in closer to me. Her body pressed closer into me as I could feel her form mold against mine. Her lips were by my ear now, scorching me to moan lightly.
“Nnnghh-nngg…” I struggled to hold back the strange passion moan. I don’t know what she did next entirely, but I remember feeling her tongue lick my ear. I moaned out louder this time, trying to stifle my moan as I bit my lip harder. I could hear her chuckle as she leaned out in front of me smiling softly.
“Next… I am going to make you feel bliss. You are going to want more passion, until it overcomes you. Your skin will tingle with each touch and your heart will race. I am going to show you soft love…” She mumbled over to me as he hands trickled up my arms. The bubbling passion in my stomach overwhelmed me. I could tell she felt the same as I opened my eyes to see her breathing heavily in front of me blushing. Her hands slowly slid all the way up my arms until they both wrapped around my neck, pulling her closer to me. I lost all sense of nervousness... as all the sounds around me seemed to disappear as I focused on her. She was beautiful, sweet, caring. She was always around to help me. I seemed to just lose all thought as I gave into her embrace and put my hands on her hips slowly as if instinctively.
I watched as she leaned in slowly, closing her eyes, as her breaths slowed down like mine did. Our lips met softly as I slowly closed my eyes after hers. I could taste her lip-gloss, her casual Cherry red flavor. We stood there, kissing deeply, letting our passions burn us. Our souls met as the passion that burned us melted us to bliss. She tasted so sweet, and I wanted more in this long night.
scream scream scream scream
