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My poems


xXxVampyGenxXx
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created in a moment of vampiric need lol
silent hunger of madness assails me
deceiving crows of misschief destroy him
a suffering path of broken weeds
a cutting edge to you i bid

my impunity is washed away
my sins are in my face
with shaking hands i plead to see
the last sunset i will not flee

in one fleeting glance
in one trembling kiss
in a time that knows no limit
i lift my eyes and close my chance

for an instant of warmth
i create my path
one that will take me home
to the place i long






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ix3glar3
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comment Commented on: Sat Nov 10, 2007 @ 10:06pm
awsome thoughts and poem. i think they were very good


comment Commented on: Sat Nov 10, 2007 @ 10:30pm
thats very good biggrin



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l3londie250
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comment Commented on: Sat Nov 10, 2007 @ 10:45pm
Wow! That was very kool i liked alot. Good job.


comment Commented on: Sun Nov 11, 2007 @ 11:00pm
wow nice poem!



sara.w.
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Kayetayo
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comment Commented on: Mon Nov 12, 2007 @ 05:43pm
Oh cool...hmm but I think this might be a good continuation of that poem

But where do someone like me belong
aflicted and rejected by the world how can I find my home

Silent thoughts, smell of blood, unreachable love, endless desire
My life shortened and stretched by my actions and yet I plan for Higher

A great cloud follows me and I wish to see the sun, the warmth of its light
yet I cant reach it I cant feel it , I feel so cold and yet I fight

When? how? and why? all of this happen..I dunno...but behind this inmense wall and its shadow
there is a brighter light I wish to follow

Climbing, seeking and looking, thats what I keep doing
Wishing for a day that my heart has a complete suthing


comment Commented on: Wed Nov 14, 2007 @ 08:07pm
oh me liki hey we make a good writting pair wink



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Cristal_watera_dragon
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comment Commented on: Mon Dec 10, 2007 @ 09:48pm
huba huba girllllllllllllllllll smile
good


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