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Poetry from the heart
Poems and lots of them.
Poem #14
My Broken Heart...

My life was dark and gloomy
until the day i saw you
standing there all alone
you were my sunshine in the rain
you were my warmth in the cold
but all that changed
the day i saw you with him
you broke my heart
then stomped it to pieces
making sure i would never feel love again
then as if that wasn't enough
you took the pieces leaving me there alone
with no sunshine and very cold
but in the darkness
i found a very small piece of my heart
that you had forgotten there on floor
and with that little piece
i was brought back into the sun
and i was warm again and also
with that little piece
i don't know why but i loved you again
after all you did to me
i still loved you
and now i know nothing is going to change that
no matter what you do
my broken heart will always belong to you.






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Zaira Akemi
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commentCommented on: Wed Sep 05, 2007 @ 12:11am
Excelent use of metaphors! I also like how you mixed tragety and haven together. heart ^^


commentCommented on: Tue Jan 15, 2008 @ 05:15am
I like your poetry,
More like analogies,
But it comes from the heart,
And that's what counts. 3nodding



Sacchariine
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