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Killisar's poem: She's Gone
I stare at her, she's lifeless, cold,
I cry.
I'm scared, I can't believe she's gone.
She is in my arms, dead, she's gone.

I hold her close to me,
as the tears pour from my eyes.
The only one that I love,
She's gone.

I hear my enemies around me,
But they don't attack,
I am on my knees with her in my arms,
She's gone.

I fell my walls of protection crashing down,
I hold her tighter in my arms.
I look up at her lover and whisper,
"She's gone".

He starts to cry to,
And we sit there in the midst of our enemies, crying.
They killed her, they killed my love,
"She's gone".

As my mind begins to clear,
I think of the words that can save her.
I begin to whisper them, my brother hears,
She's gone.

He yells for me to stop,
but I keep whispering the magical words.
My body begins to fail, I start to fade.
She's gone.

I fill my heart with the words,
I whisper the words, "I love you" in her dead ear,
then I die.
She's gone.

She rises a moment later.
She looks around, confused and sorrowful.
"Where is he?!" She begs her lover. She hears the fateful words,
"He's gone."






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Ayancia Elizabeth Fera
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commentCommented on: Fri Aug 10, 2007 @ 10:27pm
Aww...
*sniff* *sniff*
do you have any tissues?
*sniff* *sniff*
it's sad
this is killsar and aka right?


commentCommented on: Fri Aug 10, 2007 @ 10:32pm
yeah. *sob sob*



Angels_around_my_bed
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Halona Illusion
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commentCommented on: Fri Aug 10, 2007 @ 11:02pm
THE ANGST! It's so very beautiful. whee
I love it. It hurts my heart, but man, I love it. All I can say, is beautiful.

Thank you. I bet Akariko would cry hysterically after finding out. Poor girl. She'd have a lot of recovering to do. u_u
Or maybe she would commit suicide! No. She'd probably decide to do something for Killisar in his memory, instead of live her life as only a noblewoman. I don't know what though. Dx


commentCommented on: Sat Aug 11, 2007 @ 06:53pm
It is beautiful!!
*sniff*
but...
it's just...
so...
crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying crying
sad
*sniff*

This is a great poem, keep up the good work jedi, I can't wait to read what comes next!



Ayancia Elizabeth Fera
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