Welcome to Gaia! :: View User's Journal | Gaia Journals

 
 

View User's Journal

...Enigmatic World...
Enigmas View-2 ((Still Working))
Moving through the crowd slowly she pushed and ducked under flying arms and signs reading "Go Rage" or "Emily Rules", each sign was different from the other. She had her own sign?many wouldn't refer it to a sign but she always thought it was, their identical opposing characteristics.

She didn't, but then again did, like the fact of having an opposite next to her and watching her, knowing her every single move. Before she could go on she fell to the floor, head first. Lying there for a few minutes, not moving a muscle, she felt others move away and just stare at her. Slowly moving her arms, she got onto her knees and moved her black hair out of her face, looking around she saw everyone dead silent?they didn't dare laugh, they knew better then that.

Everyone feared and avoided her?they thought of her as abnormal and evil?like her sister except that they thought of her as the Goddess Of Beauty-Venus. Enigma was more like Mars?cold and empty! It was a thing she got used to, as she got older, it was something she hated and yet liked at the same time.

Getting up to her full height she looked around and spotted a guy with glasses looking paler and paler?slowly to blue. She looked him up and down and just walked away, she had no wish for a fight or any more attention?it was bad enough.

Walking to the front she had no problems this time?no one dared to approach. As she took her place at the front she focused on the stage rather the whispering people behind her. She couldn't wait to see her sister come out in that white dress?she knew that she'd look dazzling in it?like she always did.

The Goddess of Beauty?Sepia? she thought to herself and a small smile appeared, which happens very rarely, as she saw her sister come out of the darkness?in the spotlight like always.

Her stunning white dress was like a hypnotizing spell, intensified by her shinning long hair and especial her crystal blue eyes?Everyone forgot about what had just happened and drew closer to keep a clear view of Sepia. Her dress was dragging on the floor with decorative black stitched veins and flowers at the bottom. Enigma knew that her sister's back was bear and that there was a long strand of silver with a crystal hanging at its end too. At the front the dress was tight around her waist and then it separated into two pieces, one pieces of material around each breast finally joining around the neck where it was accompanied by the sliver strand and hanging crystal. It was indescribable in short?but that wasn't all.

She watched her sister place her hands upon the microphone and look towards the crowed then towards Enigma for support. With a small wave and smile Sepia returned a smile back, her pearl white teeth showing, and signaled for the music to play.

Go get them sis? Enigma thought as she let herself be taken by the soft and harmonious music one expiriences probably in a dream or when one is in love.






User Comments: [6] [add]
Lemon_Plastik
Community Member
avatar
commentCommented on: Fri Apr 29, 2005 @ 06:12pm
I hope there are more chapters to come smile Its very good. 3nodding


commentCommented on: Sat Apr 30, 2005 @ 08:06am
No worries there will be a...very unexpected one and emotional and all. I'm going to go step by step about every part and not rush into things...I have a GREAT and so emotional idea in mind...if i ever read it in a book i would maybe have cryed... crying

You're hopefully going to love it, any ideas are welcomed too. I always prefer to know what others would be expecting of the story! 3nodding



Orlia
Community Member
Green_Day_Crazy
Community Member
avatar
commentCommented on: Sat Apr 30, 2005 @ 08:19am
Hey i really like the story!...its so cool!! 3nodding heart smile


commentCommented on: Sat Apr 30, 2005 @ 09:20am
Thank you I am very happy that you all like it, i hope you can have the time to pass it on to other so they can read it too! Thank You 4laugh



Orlia
Community Member
Grey_Kitsune
Community Member
avatar
commentCommented on: Sat Apr 30, 2005 @ 03:26pm
Its the worst thing ive seen scince Napolean dynamite!

Nah, J/J, Your better than me. I need to practice a bit on my descriptions and story lines. Are these events based on real life?


commentCommented on: Fri May 13, 2005 @ 01:31pm
Nice descriptions although I think you can do better. Try to use symbolisms now and then.



silver_halcyon
Community Member
User Comments: [6] [add]
 
 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum