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I saw the
LONELINESS
in him
it shattered my soul
tore me apart
he was tall, thin,
LIFELESS
his movement was quiet and slow
like the meaning of everything had
NEVER EXISTED
I saw his tearful brown eyes full of
BITTER HATRED
without any trace of hope
his silent voice was merely a gentle whisper
I could hear the
FEAR, SADNESS, PAIN
in his words
and i felt
SORROW
gripping onto my already
BROKEN
heart
slowely
WEAKENING
the little grasp of life i still had
- by xMurderTankx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/21/2009 |
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- Title: Loneliness
- Artist: xMurderTankx
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Description:
i also did this poem for poetry month. i thought it was ok so yeah....
hope u enjoy and plz comment on improvements, somethin u like/ hate and all that stuff! ^_^ - Date: 05/21/2009
- Tags: loneliness
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Purin-chii - 09/14/2009
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eek...
It's not bad
But in MY opinion, kinda scary, to me...
Maybe it's because my mind is muddled with the thoughts of ghosts.. - Report As Spam
- Fipll - 06/25/2009
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Thats good
caps are kinda scary though. U could have used bold text for the emphasis - Report As Spam