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In my dream, I saw thee.
A wandering soul sitting beside me.
What can I do to help thee?
To make thy soul free.
Thy golden color hair,
Dancing gently in the air.
The sweet smell of sunflower,
That I can smell everywhere.
When I look through thy eyes,
I can see the blue sky.
A calm, cold expressions,
Contradicting thy emotions.
The sweet face of maiden,
That needs to be lighten.
As I stretch thine hand to reach thee,
I can feel that thou are far away from me.
Thitherward thou must fly,
In the world thou can find light.
Tragic memories is enough,
To be the reason for thee to be tough.
As I stretched thine hands towards thee,
Thou begin to fade and leave me.
I am now alone standing here,
In the place methinks is nowhere.
I woke up and touch thine face,
Cold tears running down in haste.
Facing the cold color of reality again.
Now, I know the thing I want to gain.
Thanks to thee, my maiden...
- Title: Maiden
- Artist: Xeikiel
- Description: nyahahay.. two submissions in one day O_O anyway... this is an old poem of mine and so as the other one. ^^;
- Date: 10/01/2008
- Tags: maiden xeikiel dreams poem
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Xeikiel - 10/04/2008
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thanks! biggrin
@AgentWasabi: sure you are free to add me.
@DragonFears: thank you... yes indeed that maiden is mine. ^^;
@TequillaLollipops: I'll change that right away.. ^^ - Report As Spam
- AgentWasabi - 10/01/2008
- wow. everyone here is so talanted. yours is very touching. wanna be friends?
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- Dragon_Fears - 10/01/2008
- She is your maiden heart .I likey. smile
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- Tequila Lollipops - 10/01/2008
- I like it! (Although, I'd make one change...instead of "As I stretch THINE hand to reach thee" make it "As I stretch MINE hand to reach thee" It just seems to make more sense (But knowing me, I might have missed something lol) Good job!
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