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I was in the mood for a new voyage but I never thought it would be here with my idols and my 2 best friend after me. I hide behind a cough panicking. what was I think went I said
"come on Ashley let go to the Mansion, I heard bill goes the,"
I so smart this is what I get for getting B's and C's in school. I slowly creep to the door then once I had my hand on the knob.
"Where do you think you going," said a voice behind me....
Me Saghi and Ashley were at my apartment.
“I want to do something,” I grounded.
“Well do something,” said Ashley.
“ why you guys clean for once!” yelled Saghi.
“But Saghi you better then us went it comes to clean.” I said. She looked at me mad.
“You know what,” said Ashley rapidly
“what,” we said playing along.
“Rawer.” We stare at her for a long while then It hit me.
“The hollow Mansion.” I said. They stare at me.
[sorry I tried of putting said a stuff]
Saghi- the hollow mansion.
Me- yeah it the mansion near by it’s only a rumor but I heard that there was something going on at night. And It’s morning so maybe we’ll get a prize see what’s going on. And I heard bill goes there.
Saghi- [mad] no I’m not going. What if it’s a killer or something or the police arrest us for trespassing
Me- If something goes wrong blame it on me. Or you can just stay here and I’ll go alone.
Ashley- hey I want to come!
Me- okay this well be a party.
Saghi- if the police get you I’m not come after you.
Me- deal.
[we went to the mansion I story looked like the one form twilight town in kingdom hearts.]
Me- it not going to be fun without you there to try and stop me.
Saghi looked at us as we left the car.
We went inside and all it looked like was a old mansion of no proper proportion. Saghi suddenly came in.
Me- why hello.
Saghi- Hi.
Ashley- welcome to the boring tea party.
Me- [zombie like] Blog
Saghi- You found anything.
Me- warm drumsticks and the feeling of someone trying to cover up something.
Ashley- Nothing.
We walked around more up still nothing the investigation was going nowhere I was.
We were in a room to what looked like a little girls. Stuffed animals and all. Suddenly it sounded like someone people were coming in. My heart started beating like crazy.
Ashley-[gasp] the killer hide.
We run to a hiding stop. They came In the room like 5 minuets. That felt like hours. They walked in. It was Tokio hotel.
Me- [mutter] what the spotted d**k?
Ashley- [jump out of hiding and jump bill] Bill! I love you!
Me-[get out of hiding] Ashley be care his a antique.
Saghi- [get out of hiding] what happening?
Me- Ashley Went off.
- by Loveisgrimmi |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 05/30/2009 |
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- Title: ...???? IDk
- Artist: Loveisgrimmi
- Description: plesas no bad comment
- Date: 05/30/2009
- Tags: tokiohotel
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Comments (2 Comments)
- You can call me Luna - 11/21/2009
- i really think its horrible it has no point its badly written and i just don't like it. 0/5
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- Captain-Failsalot - 08/14/2009
- That story really had no point and ended very abruptly. There were a few grammer mistakes too. So I'll give it 2 stars.
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