- Our life is a story,one for us all.Every day,the story gets a new page,every year a new chapter.We all love our lives,even people who say they don't.If we live every day to the fullest,then we have no regrets,we die when we die.But when we die,don't we want to know that we did everything we wanted to?When we die,our life flashes before our eyes,it shows good times and bad times.Wouldn't you want to have more good times then bad times?When we die our story ends,in our story,wouldn't we want to be able to show that we did everything we wanted to?We live life,we die death,but we should always have the need and right to live our lives to the fullest.
- by crazyman10123 |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/03/2008 |
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- Title: Happiness in our lives
- Artist: crazyman10123
- Description: This is just something I thought of out of the blue.Please comment and tell me if it is inspirational.Please tell me if it is good or bad and tell me what you rated,this is my first inspirational piece so I want it to be good.
- Date: 12/03/2008
- Tags: life happiness pursuit inspiration
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Beth Turner - 02/10/2009
- If you fix the spelling and take out "die death", because it just seems awkward, I think you'll do better.
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- littlecutie636 - 01/31/2009
- that is really good!
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- Kuronai Ikatani - 01/05/2009
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And like it I shall. You are right in using that metaphor. Our lives are like a book, a story waiting to be read by someone. If we wanted to we can share our story with the world. 5/5
I would like to share my story with you if it is okay with you...
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- crazyman10123 - 12/03/2008
- I hope you like it
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