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I loved you...
You told me You loved me...
You stole my heart...
You told me I stole your heart...
I didnt see what you were doing...
You new what you were doing...
I liked that hug today...
You told me on the phone that you like that hug today...
I kissed you...
You didnt kiss me back...
It was cold...
Not what i expected...
Do you love me?
I love you...
Now that were apart...
I can see what you were doing to me...
You used me...
You wanted to see love...
But when you found it.. found me...
You werent used to it...
It was foreign to you...
It was new to me too...
So why give up...
Oh ...
Theres your new girl...
No chemistry huh?...
I dont see the spark between you guys you kno...
I say this to you on the phone tonight...
You kno...
You kno you've made a bad desicion...
Come back i say...
I wanna you say...
Why not? i ask...
Because you say...
I loved you...
I loved you...
Then why not come back!?...
Because im scared you'll leave me and ill be heart broken...
I see now i say...
huh? you say...
I promise to you i wont break your heart...
Really?...
Yes i say, i want to live eternity with you, i want to love you...
I want the same...
Come back...
Ok, just promise me again...
I promise with all my heart swear to die...
I love you he says...
I love you too i say...
a fairytale i put together for you ^_^
- by iiLil_emo_PuppeTii |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 12/06/2008 |
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- Title: Fairytale story...
- Artist: iiLil_emo_PuppeTii
- Description: plz comment!
- Date: 12/06/2008
- Tags: silly
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Comments (7 Comments)
- XxStraightedgemetalheadxX - 08/17/2009
- that was beautiful, It really hit the heart
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- Sofiia x3 - 07/13/2009
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so0 beautiful D;
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- nursal1060 - 05/19/2009
- *sniff*, i love it, its so beautiful
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- Klaora - 05/17/2009
- Though I wouldn't call it "Poetry" it belongs in that arena far more so than this one. Even fiction would be better!
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- Savior_ofunsafespirits - 04/25/2009
- Um, if this is a fairy tale, you put it in the wrong place. It belongs in fiction, and you have it in non-fiction.
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- Mutandanstan - 04/08/2009
- it was nice, though to me it was obviously predictable in nature, no spice in it, bland
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- lilaznprincess85 - 03/06/2009
- nice but it has some spelling errors. 4/5
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