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CHAPTER ONE
"Owwwwww." I groaned. I was laying in the mud and my hands were killing me. "Are you ok mister?" someone asks. It was the girl I found laying on the ground only now she doesn't seem hurt.
I saw that she has long blue blue hair and blue eyes, which suprised me because I'v never seen natural blue hair. "Yeah, my hand are just sore." I replied. "My name is Leah, whats yours mister?" she asked.
"No need to call me "mister", I'm only fifteen. My name is Train." I replied."Do you gel you hair?" she asked suddenly. "My hair? Its natural like that.I'm one of those rare natural spikey haired people and its naturally red,
My eyes are also red, blood red. Which is strange because in my hometown everyone's hair and eye color is brown or black. Thinking about my hometown almost made me swell up with tears. "Whats wrong mister?" Leah asked noticing my long pause.
I chuckled again. "I told you no need to call me mister, call me train." I answer. "Why were you on the floor?" I ask her. "I don't remember. The last thing I remember is a flash of light." she says. Does she have anesima or something? I thought.
Out of nowhere I see two hounds come out. "Cooommmeeee bbbbaaaacccckkkkk." one of the hounds spoke. Although it sounded like a broken record machine. I was trying to hide my suprisement and turned to Leah and sees no sign of regonition on her face. "Who are you?" she asks it. "Dooonnnt ppppllaalyyy ggggaaammmeeesss." it growled. All of a sudden the other hound attacks Leah trying to slash her.
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- Title: Outlaw, chapter 1
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- Date: 03/13/2009
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- grimusdave - 05/12/2009
- Good, but I have to give you a 4/5 because you didn't spell the numbers out... I don't know why, but that bothers me...
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- Luna_luna8 - 03/14/2009
- wow thats good 3nodding no awesome! i want to know more! 5/5
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