There was once a lady who lead a life of crime, deciet, and endless bloodshed thet shocked the world and ended up to a world of constant fear and arrogance. At her funeral the world stood silent and still unsure of their safety. and that was only 50 years ago.
Chapter 1: Summer rain~~~
It was a cold and rainy day when suddenly there was a knock on the door. Someone with long orange hair opens the door showing a heavily rainy night. She looks around to find nobody, but a little basket laying in her doorstep. Inside the little basket lay a baby not a year older fast asleep. On it's tummy layed a letter saying "I know she may be of good use to you" then the baby opens it's eyes revealing cat like eyes.
15 years has passed
yachirin: ohayo kyoran-chan!! whee kyamirein: stare I told you! I'm NOT kyoran!! damnit!!! yachirin: oops, gomen, gome, I forgot kyamirein: you're just doing that to annoy me and you know it! yachirin: we is it working??? kyamirein: stare no.... yachirin: ;smirks; well anyway I have a meeting so you better be a good girl okay? kyamirein: I'm NOT a kid! get that in your brain if, you have one?!?!?! which I highly doubt!!! Yachirin: ouch that hurts you know!!! [she's really opposite from kyoran, is she really her descendant???] kyamirein: ei if you keep day dreaming there, you'll be late... again Yachirin: oh right, I forgot... ;walks off; kyamirein: ;sigh; why am I stuck with her??? ;walks the opposite way;
so guyz what do you think??? please comment!!! I know it's only short don't worry this isn't the FULL chapter 1... I'm just asking for opinions!!! mrgreen don't worry tomorow will be the continuation ninja ninja ninja maybe....
kyoran · Tue Apr 24, 2007 @ 10:00am · 1 Comments |