love me please love me deep for everything else to me is dream when the snow and coldness pass spring comes with love and nothing the less yet summer comes with deep deep passion and fall breaks away the only notion till winter comes again and i have lost another friend...
ninja to guy posted above:That is weird man. Anyways another nice poem. It is interesting. ninja
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Sat Jul 19, 2008 @ 04:54am
i think the guy was being nice. hes right though, it is depressing and im there for you too.
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Tue Aug 19, 2008 @ 05:44pm
i just read it again and it mad eme think of something but its like one of those only half formed notions in you head where it makes sense to you but you cant put it into words. but in short it doesnt seem as depressing
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Wed Sep 17, 2008 @ 05:07pm
i wasnt trying to make it depressing... i was trying to vent my feelings... u know... sometimes you just have to let out those lonely feelings until someone comes along *wink*
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Fri Oct 10, 2008 @ 11:32pm
f the poems I've read so far (in order from your January journal), this has to be my favourite... truly. I really enjoyed the part of for everything else to me is dream and and i have lost another friend... Keep writing, you're good at it.
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