Perfect Person

• Artist: sora wonk
• Description: For my cousin.
  
  Random Note:
  So I have come back to the arenas after 3 years and I don't think this is an ideal place for writers, especially new ones. There is a lot of negative feedback without any comments explaining how a poem can be improved.
  The writer's forums are better, but if you just want a place to put your poetry, I guess this is okay.
  Meanwhile, I'll continue giving everyone 5's for effort, or not rating at all. I think there's enough negativity. :P
  
• Date: 10/15/2013
• Tags: favorite person

Were your happiest days
in the summertime too?

Exchanging gifts, after a semester,
14 and 17,
cooking dinner,
while the parents were away--
chocolate for breakfast,
whenever cake.

Just poking you
intermittently made me
effortlessly
happy.

Browsing tumblr
together
into deep evening.

Comments

[Nemone]

I'm coming back after a while too so I totally get you. Lots of people randomly giving 1 star for no reason and all that. By the way good job on this, I write free-verse every now and then myself (although it's often not well received). It's a lot harder than writing something that rhymes so good job. 5/5

[Soreha Yuki]

It seamed random at first but than again it's all connected and make perfect seance.. it's nothing like my poetry but than again I seam to like it ^__^ keep up the good work..