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A rose with its fragile beauty
Blooms bright and free
In the the warmth of the sun
And brings smiles to the faces
Of all who see it
But every rose has its thorns
And when the icey winter
Spreads its cold touch throughout the land
The rose dies...
Leaving only the ugly thorns behind
Who then will want to smile
At the thorn bush that once held such beauty
But is now no longer wanted
This shall be my fate as well..
For when the ice of my heart
Kills the roses from my soul
So to shall I become the ugly bush
With thorns waiting to hurt those
Who venture too close
While I wait in silence
For someone to nurture me to life
So I may once again have
My beautiful roses
and be loved by those who see me
- by DarkHellCat |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/07/2013 |
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- Title: The Unwanted Rose
- Artist: DarkHellCat
- Description: new poem
- Date: 03/07/2013
- Tags: unwanted rose
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Comments (1 Comments)
- flyys - 04/04/2013
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i kinda feel like it could be written a bit better, not sure how, but maybe choppiness? i dunno
but the idea is nice. However it also kind of feels like your feelings (the ice) was thrown in randomly. - Report As Spam