I've tried

• Artist: vampire_star_night
• Description: just a song i made up
• Date: 08/06/2012
• Tags: tried songs love madeup

There once was you and me
In this forbidden dream
Now im stuck in a trap of love
You'r heart belongs to someone new
And left me in the dark

I've tried to move on
I've tried to hide this feeling away
Nothing seems to work
Even if i changed

I was there for you when you got hurt
And you'r there for me when i cry
Now you just push me aside
In till one day you need me again

Tell me, do you love me?
Or am i just your toy?
Just like a toy, you play with my heart
Then one day, you break me apart

I've tried to move on
i've tried to hide this feeling away
Nothing seems to work
Even if i changed

You'r heart imprisons mine
Yet to blind to see throw my lies
When i say i give up and i am fine
Even with the pain in my lonely eyes
Can you hear the words i am trying to say

To me your heart is an iron Cage
One i cant seem to escape
I try to free myself
To move on with my life
But even my own heart i can not escape

Each night i cry myself to sleep
Wishing for another chance
Never knowing if it will come ture
Or if one day i will finally be free

I've tried to move on
i've tried to hide this feeling away
Nothing seems to work
Even if i changed

Hear these words i say

Comments

[SILVERSONICALL]

Yeah mabe the theme is popular but you must remember how do the lyrics relate to the writer, eaen if you prefer another gener of music or another punch to it, you must step to her level to apeel to the theme to understand what the author feels and how well the artist expressed it. I beleve she did great n_n.

[Melvin Flakes]

i feel like ive read this before...........get my attention! write someting unique and shocking