Show off

• Artist: naynay365
• Description: about a boy i loved once
  
• Date: 04/28/2011
• Tags: show

i trusted you with my heart and soul give you my heart to hold played your game for so many years
all thats cover by my tears i crossed my heart and hoped to god that it wasnt some one els as i peeked throw the door you and her on my brand new bed thinking to my self wtf did i do to be lied to all these years some show off you are pretending that you care

you put up a front when your friends come around makes me wonder what you say about me when im not around i hate that i loved you for so long and so blind not to see you were showing off this whole inter time

who could ever love with a heart so cold like yours and to think i wanted more i see now what you show off for to make your self feel better

cause youve always been this dirty little boy

Comments

[Overworkedandunderpaid]

You don't format this as a poem. It's a narrative. Not only that, you didn't capitalize and you're theme is cliched and abused. Write something original and attend an english class.

[Masachi Okami]

Too many spelling errors and capitalization problems as well.