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Everyone thinks
I have no feelings,
But the truth is
I feel more than they do.
And this poem will be
A living proof of the burdens,
That I am sentimental.
That my feelings
Are intertwined
With the good,
The bad,
The sad,
And the ever growing hate
That fills my heart
With each passing day.
But I will try
To make everything better,
Even if it kills me,
Or make me suffer
In unimaginable ways.
That is living.
That is feeling.
- by lil_ecuador_WARior |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/19/2011 |
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- Title: Feelings
- Artist: lil_ecuador_WARior
- Description: This is a poem I created. I have been told that I have no feelings. These poems that will now be posted here will be part of a small collection of poems that will be called Heartless Series (I have no life lol). There will be more poems to come. This is basically the prologue in a way, lol.
- Date: 03/19/2011
- Tags: feelings
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Comments (4 Comments)
- lil_ecuador_WARior - 04/13/2011
- Kills me or makes me suffer in unimaginable ways" it's basically me saying, I will try to fix everything, including myself, even if it hurts me more than you would expect. Haha sorry If this poem offended you in any way, and I didn't mean for this response to be so long lol. anyway, thank you for taking the time of day to at least comment on my poem, I really appreciate it, and once again, I'm sorry if this poem offended you. Thank you and I hope you enjoy your day smile
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- lil_ecuador_WARior - 04/13/2011
- A lot worse than I do, but I can't help feel attest a tad bit upset about this. It's just a human emotion we cannot ignore. And though this poem may seem like I'm all " I hate my life, its horrible , blah blah blah." I do enjoy my life, but it just hurts me when the person I look up to feels this way about me. That poem was created in a really bad week for me lol. And it's more of a reassurance for myself, you could say, like when I wrote, "but I will try to make everything better, even if it
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- lil_ecuador_WARior - 04/13/2011
- Of course. We all feel pain in one way or another. But I have been called heartless, emotionless, etc by people you least expect, even though to myself, I don't think I act heartless. In certain situations, yes I chose not to show emotion, but that doesn't mean that I don't have any. And plus, though people chose not to think of it this way, we can't help but feel sad for ourselves sometimes. Yes tragedies do happen, people will be hurt, and we all know it. I know A LOT of people in the world
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- Pixiestyx1992 - 04/13/2011
- It may seem like you feel things more intensely then other people. but you have to remember other people have pain too
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