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Invisible Wings ~ A Mad Fiasco
They carry me to a place
These invisible wings.
Of wonders and beauty,
Palaces and kings.
With these wings, I soar
When I wake up they aren't there anymore.
Only when in dreams does this miracle occur.
When will I fly? I can never be sure.
- by A Mad Fiasco |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/01/2011 |
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- Title: Invisible Wings
- Artist: A Mad Fiasco
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Description:
Re-submission of this poem; hoping it will get more votes and more feedback. Please comment! :3
Originally this was written about ballet, and expression of emotions through dance. However, it has evolved quite a bit and though it is rather short I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I did writing it. c: - Date: 03/01/2011
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Skinny Legend - 03/17/2011
- AWSOME! biggrin you ad some imagery details, but this is good five stars! smile
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- A Mad Fiasco - 03/04/2011
- Thank you! smile
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- silven_flameblazer - 03/02/2011
- Good! I like it :3 Though the word "occur" seems a bit technical to me, but thats just me. Write more poems.
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