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The sky opens up a glittered abyss
The last bastion of a folded galaxy glides away
Obscured by the billions of miles of dark atmosphere
Here I stand, observing the massive decaying decadence
The universe and all the diamonds it purveys
The incandescent luminosity.
I fear I might fade away at the grandeur.
As I obey the dazzling guides and follow into the night, a spark of indefinite size paints the deep arc above, an almost indifferent hue. In such fluidity that a crack of any kind of canvas cannot be heard.
Greying, then washing the palette clean and misting a blue spray along the horizon.
As I observe, the colour tints whiter and whiter until it transforms along the curvature into a haze of warmth and the jeweled coat of velvet bends and flows out of existence.
I observe this, as always, from the wrong side. The philosophical side. The dreamless flow of unfiltered ideas. The side that creates both masterpiece and madness.
The vivid lustre of a sky awash with promise.
- Title: Morning free form
- Artist: Whip
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Description:
I stay awake. I like to free form and let ideas and images flow. I rarely edit.
I don't care what you rate it. The arenas are broken anyway. Just read it and let me know what it made you feel/think of. That's all I really care about, tbh.
Comment if you like. I know my writing is inaccessible and I don't possess good grammar. I actually don't really care too much about that, so don't waste your time pointing it out to me. I write for fun. - Date: 01/23/2011
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Comments (1 Comments)
- vardofive - 01/29/2011
- Phantasmagoric and wonderfully refreshing given the regular fare around here. Very, very well done.
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