Tears dry on their own

• Artist: Chrissy J
• Description:
• Date: 01/01/2011
• Tags: tears their

I speak
but my voice, unheard, a mere whisper made from a thousand miles away.
Unrecognized, i melt into the background, my home.
I welcome the silence, darkness with open arms.
With love and affection, i cradle my bucket full of salty tears
but such is life, every humiliation strengthens and every insult puts a block of confidence on self esteem.
wounds will heal and tears dry on their own.

Comments

[Chrissy J]

Ok, advice taken. It sounds awesome over all to me

[EarlsGarden]

6th line you could've put "but such is life" then hit enter then put the one followin it format would look better

the ending sounds incomplete..it's missing somethin, it doesn't fit with the 2nd last line very well