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To my friend across the ocean
Who I have never seen
I doubt you’ll ever read this
But know each word I mean
Though I’ve never seen your face
Or heard you speak a single word
I know nothing could ever replace
Either of them and be preferred
Your voice must be like music to ones ears
And your face enlightening when one sees you smile
So to see and hear you I’ll wait all my years
For my love can’t be stopped even by the oceans endless miles.
But I know that this is but a wishful dream
For even if I cross this dividing sea
And tell how I feel your heart is locked
And alas, I am not worthy of its key
- by Closedaccount1234567890 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/13/2010 |
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- Title: To My Friend
- Artist: Closedaccount1234567890
- Description: A poem I wrote years ago for a woman I fell in love with. I now wish to use this as a base to improve my poetry skills. In addition I am also wondering what people simply think about this poem. Please R+R. :)
- Date: 11/13/2010
- Tags: friend ocean love romance
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Closedaccount1234567890 - 12/12/2010
- Thanks!
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- Jagatron - 11/21/2010
- This is great. Love it.
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- Closedaccount1234567890 - 11/14/2010
- Thanks alot! I'm glad you think it's good (I didn't even give myself a 5 for this). And yeah, most people seem to enjoy the last two lines the best. ^^
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- Sparkly_Innocence - 11/14/2010
- I love this... it's adorable! I love the last two lines... very creative... I gave you 5!
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