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The door opens,
The demon walks inside.
You feel his sins,
You just want to hide.
You see the chains,
As he looks at you.
You feel the pain,
A fear anew.
No one will look,
As the time ticks by.
You sit on your nook,
And begin to cry.
“Don’t you lie,”
He chooses to yell.
You wish you could die,
And go to hell.
You pick up the blade,
And slit your throat.
As the light begins to fade,
You feel as if you float.
No one misses you,
And they never will.
The just wished to,
Witness the kill.
- by Lexia La Lun |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/04/2010 |
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- Title: Door to Darkness
- Artist: Lexia La Lun
- Description: this is a poem i wrote last year.
- Date: 10/04/2010
- Tags: door darkness poems
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Lexia La Lun - 04/02/2011
- well this poem is about the demon that is Depression you want to get away from it as fast as you can and you feel that you have no one to turn to
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- Treasons - 10/24/2010
- It's very well done. My only critique would be the reason of it. There is no way to tell you to stay on topic, but your truly everywhere. "Alice Loves Him" was correct in her thinking, however, I believe you show massive potential, just abet me to grasp the concept. Other than that, well done.
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- bram toker - 10/08/2010
- Very interesting, but I can't seem to grasp the concept here.
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- VampScourge - 10/05/2010
- cool poem^^
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- Mikami - King of Shadows - 10/04/2010
- very nice.
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