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No matter how far your wings spread
You’ll still be black, cold, and dead
In a world that you really dread
You cannot find comfort in your own bed
The world in an ocean
The sky is the seas
You are just an ant
With no opportunities
How can one so small
Expect to rule it all
In a world that could crush you
Starve you and control you
Why fly, your wings no stuck to the ground
The weight not holding you still
You aren’t trapped on a string
Waiting to be let go
You are free
If there ever was a word
Free
Something not many know
You hands reach out to stop the pain
But the game is only beginning
Life isn’t a game you’ll be winning
Because unlike life the game is never ending
We are worthless
Cowards emotional bastards
Waiting to swallowed and shoved in a groun
With a tomb stone with are name
Well all those frown down at us
And think you are insane
We are gone form the world
Spirits of plies
We cannot see or feel
Why see and feel at all
Because one day you’ll be stuck
In ash, or a hole
Waiting for the body
You kept flawless for years
To fall into pieces
Were you can’t cry no tears
For get it all
It all will end soon
Because like everything in the world
You will soon die
My little butterfly
- Title: My Little Butterfly
- Artist: 11linda
- Description: Tell me any errors that you see, or anything else, this is a free verse poem.
- Date: 08/27/2010
- Tags: little butterfly
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Comments (2 Comments)
- 11linda - 10/24/2010
- No offence taken, I know their are errors... I am dyslexic it would shock me if people didn't find things.
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- Treasons - 10/24/2010
- I can see that you like free verse poems. However, may I critique that your overall stanzas are a little "iffy". Some areas also are in dire need of correct sentence structure. Mind you that when proof reading, look for any misspellings and change lines that are reiterated with no use of technique. I don't mean to offend you in anyway. I just like to write, and with that, critique. smile
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