Frozen

• Artist: lily1714
• Description: This is descibing what it would be like to dround("sleep") in a freezing pound. This a free peom which means nothing rhymes.
• Date: 07/18/2010
• Tags: frozen

No ripples disturb this sweet serenity,
Time collapses in this freezing realm,
Smooth escape from this embedded life,
Held together with no welcome but no parting.

Icy hands clasped together with no forgiveness,
One movement could lead to the end,
But could also lead to ones enchantment,
Darkness so still and near to ones heart.

Begging for one step closer to ones fall,
Sleepiness draws to its bitter-sweet clutches,
Warm darkness surrounds but then nothing,
Painful pleasure to sweet for the pursuer.

Comments

[lily1714]

thanks smile

[The-Poison-Muffin]

If it did rhyme, it wouldn't be as amazing. The use of the words and the meanings of them put together in harmonious use... It's a brilliant piece.