Let Me Die

• Artist: Imperious Risk
• Description: a poem about...... um...... death I guess
• Date: 05/16/2010
• Tags: poem death shine elijah

Maybe the sky will fall down over our heads
Maybe our fate will be set in stone some day
You know, I could care less
Now, what if I left you today?
Who said I ever had too keep on going with you?
The world's gonna end someday anyway
Tell me, Is there a cure for unknown love?

Can I not die?
Until you came, I've tried!

When the sky finnaly tumbles down
I won't care
Because its me I fear
Makes the air come right outta me
But I don't care
Please let me try!

Please let me try!
Just let me die!

When its done!
If it ever will
Take my advice
Just let me be

When my eyes
Dialate to soon
I will erupt
Thats when I die!
Just let me die!

It takes so long
It wont be here too soon
I see it in my mind's eye

I want to die!
Just let me die!
Please, please die soon!


Just please don't cry

Comments

[Atheshya]

Check for grammar mistakes next time, there are multiple instances in this poem of 'to' and 'too' being mixed up. (for reference, 'to' is used in situations like 'he walked to the store', and 'too' is used in situations like 'me too!') Also, this poem doesn't leave strong images in one's mind, it's just a string of common phrases. However, that CAN be okay for lyrics, so it depends on what your goal here was.