Blur

• Artist: II Scattered Dreams II
• Description: Sound, blurred out by the beat of my heart
  As it beats louder when I see you
  My mind moving faster than sound
  My body feeling light
  The world blurs
  Friends that were once clear vanish
  And all I think about is you
  You blur my life away
• Date: 04/30/2010
• Tags: blur

plz comment and rate. i planning to enter lots of my poetry into some contests so this would really help me out. thankies ^^

Comments

[Coolyei]

Psst. Switch out your description and lyric/poem thing.

Pretty good, but it seems to re-use those oh so stereotypical words.

3/5