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another night deprived of slumber
hours passing without number
because im thinking of you
and now the sky is turning blue
- by DeAd_FROM_THE_StArT |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/19/2010 |
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- Title: dreaming of you
- Artist: DeAd_FROM_THE_StArT
- Description: to my gf ~ i lovez you
- Date: 02/19/2010
- Tags: dreaming
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Sam the Morningstar - 03/05/2010
- all I can say is don't feel like you have to stay with the rhyming. It's very constrictive and doesnt allow you to really emote
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- DeAd_FROM_THE_StArT - 03/03/2010
- thanks for your constructive critisism i will take it well.....
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- sora wonk - 03/03/2010
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another night deprived of slumber
hours passing without number
and not even spent having really hot fantasies
about a babelicious babe not wearing pant-asies
it's just insomnia, it's so freaking lame
so i write dumb reviews and wait for daybreak.
--needless to say i liked this poem
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